 Tsuki no Akebono 2008-12-19 . chapter 9OMG~!
WAO~
mores~!
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happy holidays... |
 Mintca 2008-08-03 . chapter 9 Can you upload the next chapter sooner? I love read it...
Thanks to make an awesome story like this, i love it!! |
 allen niichan 2008-07-02 . chapter 9i luv this story. may u please write more? i can't wait 2 see what happens. o ya, luffy has brown eyes. just 2 tell u. |
 Zegwarian310 2008-04-27 . chapter 9I love this story! I can't to read more of it! |
 waver-chan 2008-04-25 . chapter 9great story!! keep on writing!!
theres nothing to be discouraged about!
its a great story that deserves new chapters and great reveiws! |
 renegadewriter8 2007-11-10 . chapter 9please continue now! must read! AND U BETTER MAKE LUFFYS AND ACES REUNION LONG AND SAD ANS ALL THAT STUFF!! (nad make him kick crocodiles ** for putting his baby brother through hell!!)
good luck I LOVE IT!! |
 black fire fox56 2007-09-05 . chapter 9Luffy so dame cute! X3 feelz sorry 4 luffy 4 what stas did 2 him! |
 C.Z.G. 2007-08-26 . chapter 9 AH! U NEED TO UPDATE THIS NOW! DON'T LEAVE US HANGIN!
PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE! |
 black fire fox 2007-08-19 . chapter 9 so cool! X3 plezz keep typing up chapterz! |
 Kiari1112 2007-07-18 . chapter 9yay yay yay! ok plz update soon this is so great! poor zoro getting a soft spot for the enemy! but thats ok cause its luffy :D
But Kuro... thank god thisisnt my fic cause i never would have come up with that, thisshould make things interesting... and what are the black arms are they comming back l8r in the story?
cant wait for the next post soplz update soon! |
 761piu 2007-04-14 . chapter 9 Whoa! continue!! this is getting interestin :D |
 Rienquish 2007-04-03 . chapter 9 I red them all at once, so you'll get all the reviews at once XD
What really surprised me was that Luffy joined in the BW, I didn't ecspect that... Crocodile is sucha sly guy...
I love'd your Mr 2! well I love him in the serier too, but you write of him really good ^^
Man I laughed at the "child molester Zoro" XD But what can he do about it, that's what he is. *confirming nod* And it's no use for him to struggle against the fact that he's already fallen for Luffy! Mwahaha!!
And I love your angsty Luffy!_>)
Nuu! I'm... fic thirsty XD for more!
I hope I didn't forget anyth..OH yea! You let Luffy get raped!! shame on you!! (*actyally liked that part really much :3*) but Zoro's going make him forget all the bad memories... right? *puppy face*
There! I love your story so keep up with it! And do not get discouraged! ^^
... angsty, angsty, angsty.. I love it and need more XD |
 hinatasXbestXfriend 2007-04-02 . chapter 9Stas...so basiclly Luffy isn't a virgan...WTF!?!?!?!!?!? |
 Moohgough 2007-04-01 . chapter 9I'm reviewing! nah!! this is awesome!! seriously!! and your writing has improved completly throughout it, its got much better!! *nodnod*
Gah! angst, poor luffy T.T! nah!! zoro, cute!! |
 Shiruji-chan 2007-04-01 . chapter 9Great ficcy!! :D You really have improved in the latest few chapter! Keep it up! Oh, and chapter 8 was evil XD You see, I liked the ending. -hint hint nudge nugde- Ah forget it.
Aanyways, I love that Ace finds Luffy. Just like in the Anime X3 but still so different. Awwh I have a feeling there's gonna be alot of angst and fluff here. Yummy!
Keep up the work! You're doing good! |