Okay, just finished reading this. Chapter 8 has to be the best in here. So mind twisting, so amuzingly cute, sad. Takes your feelings onto a rollercoaster. Great job.

Though as expected, you're not on my favourite story list for no reason. =]

Okay, having read chapter one through 5 in a row, I must review now, xD


I love how simple these little one chapters are, coming down to the same thing. I absolutely love it. You're so damn inspiring. I'm writing a 100-themes Cloti challenge, so I'm guessing it would be kinda like this. You're absolutely making it easier for me, while I'm dealing with a writers block! They're all so in character too... Amazing. I'm superly amazed.

okay, wasn't going to comment on every one of these chapters but this one is just - that needed a long exhale at the end as a reader. The whole touching things - very insightful and deep and I loved the way you handled it. It makes perfect sense and you brought it out perfectly.

wow - a Barrett fic! Hard to find but nice. And you caught him so well. Him and Tifa and their weird relationship. Really well done and I had to laugh at the end - they all end up with facial injuries. What are friends/family/cahoots for, right?

Great ending - you managed to shock me in a pre-game fic while not contradicting anything. Well done! And you'd BETTER not mind that it's not a Post-AC fic. Gosh! It's commendable!
I enjoyed this immensely! It's hard to find things to improve upon. I suppose you could add some more 'morning after' stuff to emphasize how exactly they could continue without awkwardness. The moment where Cloud tells Tifa that "he=Zack?" could be expanded upon as well. But, it's a finished fic, and a great one at that.

lol yush random o.o

I don't usually review much but I can't help but do it now. I love your story. Love it, Love it, Love it. Keep it up. ;)

NUU!!
This is the end?! D:

ZOMG, it was birlliant while it lasted.. ;'(
Loved the ending line, and the middle bit, and the beginning...
No really, the part when Barret could barely ask Cloud for a favour? = HA!!
I've never really thought of the possibility that if Cloud has tayed, Tifa could've fought him... T.T;;
Anyway, sorry bout this EsSaY of a review, but this fic is awesome! :D

.::Tibbs::.

I'm so happy I found this! Perfect tie in to the begninnig of VII

Alas, even if this is the end, the last line serves as the perfect lead-up to the events of FFVII!! :D

Still, you know how happy it makes me to see how masterfully you managed to write in the kiss (even if it was within a state of the two kissers in question being in a state of inebriation. ;))

My favourite bits have to be from how you put snippets of Barret, Marlene, Jesse, Wedge and Biggs here and there, and yet be able to keep the mainstream focus on Cloud and Tifa.

(All and above, though, this has got to be the best of the few canon, pre-FFVII, CloTi stories that I've been blessed to read. :))

Flibbergibbit, Horky, you make me so jealous! Can't believe I didn't pick up on this story earlier- I'm only on Chapter One and I'm already hooked! This is beautifully done, and I love how your portrayed Tifa and Aeris's emotions.

Yay :)

Nicely done, very believable, and I liked the style you used to write it.

That was incredible. Just like always.

Sad to see it coming to an end... but I hope to see more stories like this from you.

Oh god, how I love the "silence" in this fic. You're so good at this! Please continue writing! Your choice of words, the way you describe everything... their just so great! (One thing though: Err, isn't it supposed to be "heroes"? With an "E" ^^)

I like stories that aren't mainstream and you did a really great job on this one. I'll be looking for your next one.