Gotta admit, I chuckled at the beginning, the bake-sale.

OMG, I can't belive I hadn't read this one! I LOVE your stuff, but I totally missed this.
I had tears in my eyes almost from the beginning. You have a way of really showing off Tony's inner turmoil of emotions, and I think he's tired of FEELING.
Fav lines:
"I wouldn’t do it like that."
It takes him a good ten minutes to figure out what that only freaks them out more.
Oh, Tony, he's just a BOY sometimes, isn't he?
Thanks and love! /Belker

Okay, I just read this again for the first time in ages and just wanted to say that I still love it. It's wonderful, and heartwrenching, and I feel every minute of it. *le sigh*

Okay... That was kinda depressing. *nods* Once again great writing, and once again I'm in complete awe of the skills... But still... So very depressing.

That was really good... i had tears in my eyes.

Another great story. I liked the Turkish delight scene.

Wow! This was a great story. Hope more chapts come or a sequel!

wow! i'm gonna go cry now...great fic!

quite beatiful.it was so.that was so amazing and beatiful and sweet,i loved it.it was and is above and beyound anything ive ever read.you should become a professional writer.i love you for writting something this great.i feel as though i should cry.idk y,its just soo beatiful and amazingly written,its ppl like you who make me want to write more.you probaly are adored.I dont know how you did it but you did.Im not even sure what you did,and as i was reading it i was confused,but not confused and mad,i just kept reading,knowing it was still perferct.it truly was so amazing.i know you didnt mean to but to me,this line was humorous:'Forget death by car. Death by Ziva. Death by Ziva-related traffic fatality. Death by road rage, by wrong side of the road, by yellow light—'.that was funny,remeberance of scenes w/here awlful driving.still i am confussed w/the whole bake sale and death.and why can him and Ziva just be compainons adn confide and pour their hearts out to one another,why not just that and nothing more?hmm.i thought of that before,but now its so clear to me now that they would probaly work out so much better,so much more like that than and an actual realationshipl.well,goodbye!im surely putting you on my favsand this masterpiece of yours,which i absoloutely LOVED!-Katelyn!
~*~Live Your Life,worryfree and STARFULL!!~*~

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*big
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Really really ace and beautiful. One of the only tiva fics I've read that's actually worth anything. Lovely voice work - sombre and perfect.

aw... i love this...it's so emotional

Beautiful job! So well written and touching. This is going to my faves, right now. I loved these lines:

Ziva takes her hand away. The absence of touch leaves him cold. “She didn’t love you.”
“I know,” he says. “They never do.”


Keep up the great work!

Holy **.

Amazing.

Damn, that was intense. Really well done. I'm not the hugest Tony/Ziva fan, but the way this was written...You made me like them as a possible pairing. Heartbreaking and just well written. Beautiful.

oh wow, that was all incredibly moving and mysterious.
'He loves Ziva, too, but she can’t pull him back to the surface. No one can, not anymore.'
That sentence just summed it up for me. It's just so amazingly deep and emotional. Thank you for writing it, now i'm going to furrow through the rest of your story's!