hey girl its mattie i loved your this it was goo dtalk to you later

Hmmm...interesting. Are ya really gonna stop? Well thanks for reviewing my fic. Keep up the good work! (I sound like my Science teacher...)

why are you stopping? it can't be near as strange as some stories i've read. i like this story.

You baka Sors-chan. I told you before to send me the stories for eidting before you post them. Please do that for the next chapters. And don't turn into a narriator, I'll have to shot you. Pretty good ideas. Write more as usual.

Sorry people but I don't think I'll do any more on this one because it's geeting weird. I'm going to do another one thats just Kuja's childhood.

I like this story and i can't wait for it to continue.

Wow! What's gonna happen next? The lifestream idea is interesting...

Hey Sors. Didn't know you had written this much. Really good, need to send to me to EDIT GRAMMER/SPELLING! Other than that, it's good. CJ say so too.

good start. wouldn't mind seeing more.

This is cool! I've never read a fic about Zidane or Kuja's past, so it's nice to finally see one! Keep writing!

You have it right, don't worry. It's an intresting start! I'd enjoy seeing more.

What's next! WHAT'S NEXT'S!