so r u going to finish this story?

i've never read fic before so i love it and why did u stop updating it? Pls update it coz this is one of my fav balthierxashe fic.

I can't help to laugh at the third chapter, lol, xD

Anyway, i really like this chapter so much :D

I have fallen in love with this coupling (although I wish he'd delivered the ring to her at the end of the game himself...)! Please update very soon!

i really enjoy this fic. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Author’s note: REMEMBER TO REVIEW!

I REVIEWED! Aww, poor Balthier :P

Poor Rasler, having too put up with that stubborn ass of a gentleman...

lol. Luvin it so far!

W00t

nice...

this is def. my fav chapter

The plot is a little out there compared to the serious plots I'm used to getting from BalthierAshe stories, but I found myself weirdly attracted to reading each chapter after the next.

This is nice!

Yes, long chapters good. Hahaha this is so unique and clever, who'd ever think to write something like this? You of course ;) update soon

Good long chapters. I love long chapters. Good story. Very different plot from all the other FFXII stories around. Pls update soon.

lol. the middle part is funny 'love it. hehe.

plz continue!

-olweiz smile-zemmy solidor

Very nice chapter, a few grammatical mistakes and spelling errors but very nice. You proved in this chapter that your rating was correct. I have one thing I'd like to address though...you spelt Ashe's name Ashenlia...it's supposed to be Ashelia.

-DarkShine07

This chapter was very entertaining and I am intent on finding out where your story is going. Please continue soon!

-DarkShine07