Wow. This story is so universal. Like, I like how the individual titles make them seem like chapters.
Good job.

Wow, this really captures the true spirit of Eriol and Tomoyo perfectly. Truly a beautiful piece. Great job!

This is a really pretty story.

ahahaa cute story.

What a beautiful story. The poetry is beauriful and it is written and said with much wisdom. I loved it.

My god, this is an amazing story. I like the use of different words and phrases from the different songs and poem, it really adds depth to the story. Amazing story! Loved it :) I like the fact that you used so many different terms and you described everything so well, and I really loved the ending. Under the footnotes, I am really grateful you put everything in, because it explains a lot and helps the reader understand the story even more. Again, an amazing well-written story.

wow... you've worked on this for a long time. no wonder it is so good. easily one of my favorites. congratulations! i really admire CLAMP but i believe it's one of their biggest mistakes, not making ExT official. i hope they do a tsubasa chronicles of some sort featuring ExT... =)

I loved this. I really did. It was very well written, very beautiful, and I almost cried from the sheer beauty of this. You could write a short story, just change the names. It would be amazing. The only thing I can say is that however beautiful it was, you kept shifting between present tense and past tense. The spelling was excellent, much better than my own, and the grammar, besides shifting between past and present tense, was better than most.

This was well written and well composed, I’ll tell you that! :DD I enjoyed reading it very much, yo. For one, your descriptions of places were sensational that one would feel the need to be there and experience the many eloquent cultures Eriol resided to. I must say, I’ve always had a fascination with the European district, but that’s not my excuse for love zee story! You’ve written an original, at least in the CCS category. Thanks, I loved it! MORE!

Wow! That was a truly amazing story. Really, I love all the poetry, the poems are absolutely gorgeous. I really loved this story, and you must have done a lot of research! It's also a very sweet story between Eriol and Tomoyo, this story is so full of meaning! I really loved it. Awesome job :)

This has to be my absolute favorite Eriol/Tomoyo fanfiction out there. Excellent work.

I've always loved how you make reference to outside works, and Le Figlia Che Piange is a wonderful poem. Your use of the international stage makes the story seem more universal, and it seems more fitting to place those two in Europe anyway - they're so refined and yet so tragic, beautiful with a history full of sorrow. Your philosophy is also marvelous, and I personally find most of it very easy to accept since I've seen much of it before but hadn't found the words to express it.

As often as I read stories otherwise, I do adore how you made their relationship actually plausible - fanfiction writers tend to make them fall in love with each other, realizing the other had been beside them all along. As nice as the idea is, deep down I knew it was never possible; this story provides an alternative that actually speaks the truth. Two people, broken by the strength of their love for another, see kindred spirits in each other and choose to remain together, quietly comforting the other as they escape their past in the history of another world.

Ah, enough with me trying to sound eloquent and stroking your ego. =) Fabulous job.

Awesome story.

I learned a lot about Prague while reading these :) and I also like the poems you put in this story.

Hope to read more from you...

This is a well-written piece, Hally Dang. I like your style very much, although, if you think it necessary, there is much room for improvement. As to the story, I'm quite surprised with the amount of knowledge you have about Prague. Have you actually been there? Basically, that's it. Congratulations on this one, and I really enjoyed it as well.

Very nicely done! There was much detail put on the emotions of the characters. It was executed very well on how the emotions were potrayed! Keep up the good work! ^_^

Hally-chan, this was wonderful-- so wonderful that I have difficulty trying to explain how. I loved the concept of wanderlust, of home; I loved how the emotions were so tangible, I loved how each part flows to the next like water.

I love this, and am truly honored that it is for me. Definitely worth the wait. Thank you so much.