Just some errors here: gaara is KAZEKAGE not hokage. And its SHIKAMARU not shinkamaru. Other those few details and that its kinda ooc its very good

I loved the story. It was very funny. Keep up the good work.

lol. The way Gaara acted was funny XD.

The way Tamaya and Gaara acted is exactly how me and my gay mate acts XD. It was like looking into a mirror. :D

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Realy good. :)

I loved the story very cute and very funny!

I really loved it!

NO! u have to write more! u cant leave us hanging! -on knees begging-

lolz i loved it funny and romantic and this is my fav part

"You are so immature."

"You're still a virgin and even after all of my effort, this brings tears to my eyes."

"Shut up and stop spouting false statement!"

"False? False? False! God did answer my prayers."

LOVED IT so funny

That last part was crazy...

Tamaya reminds me of this character from a series of books...

Aw... I wanted naruto to keep going...

(Heh heh, a reader much to sick in the head for a sweet little relationship).

Ah LOL. Tamaya's funneh and I love your clueless Gaara (though not as much as Naruto does! *winkwink*)

lol. Funny and cute.

Please continue the story _

Please right what will happen please please please-on my knees begging

Hmm, did Naruto pick up some tricks from Ero-sennin, or is it the effect of the fox, or is he just like all other guys and a pervert? Haha, good story I definitely want to read more!