Argh! I love your stories!
This is so touching!

It doesn't matter that it's vague and uncharacterised. It made my skin tingle. Raw.

Hey! That's a nice idea. I could empathize very easily with Harry there. Excellent!

You have such a big potential to become a writter or at least a poet or song writer
You really know how to capture emotions its amazing well done

Its awesome!

This was a great oneshot. I loved it--it really showed the craziness, uncertainty, and sadness when a loved one dies.

I read this once before, and didn't review, but for the life of me and can't remember why. You have such an amazing ability to capture emotion. I don't know if you have ever lost anyone close to you. To be able to express that kind of loss and hopelessness so vividly without experiencing it first hand takes great talent. You are a fantastic writer.

wow. I almost cryed. It was really good.

I've just read your story and I just wanted to say that I'm very sorry for your lost, and thank you, because you made me realize how important my friends are in my life , and that life is too short and we should let people know how much we love them now because there might not be another chance.Again I'm sorry for your lost and I hope you find the peace to move on, for you, your friend and the people who remain and love you as well.

You captured everything perfectly. I love angsty stories that have feelings stated so simply, so simply that only few people can truely understand the volumes they speak. this is amazing and I'd love to read more work from you.

Love,
Victoria Lily

why does everything you write make me cry?

Wicked awesome job. The feeling is great, and you really draw the reader in. My only suggestion would be to actually combine some of the one-sentance paragraphs. Other than that, like I said, your writing is great!

I thought this was really sweet and beautiful. It was well written. I enjoyed reading it. Nice work!

i agree.

this seemed so personal that at first i wasnt sure how to even review it. but it was beautiful and i loved reading it.