I am so loving Nao in this fic XDD

Fave lines of the last two chapters:

(Ah, young people these days... She then frowned at her own thought. Is it just me, or are they all gay?

And...

"CHU!" A wet, sloppy kiss was forcefully slapped onto the timid girl's lips.

A fuming Haruka jumped out from behind the tree. "GET YOUR FUCKING LIPS OFF MY YUKINO YOU FILTHY LITTLE...!"

"I love Haruka too! CHU!")

Absolute classics! XD

Urg...okay the incestuous kiss nearly killed this whole thing for me...but I'll keep going on, and hope that everything becomes clearer...

I died. I just...died laughing XD
There are just too many classic HILARIOUS lines to list them all. Wow. Just. Wow. You are a BRILLIANT writer XDD

LOL!! Omg omg. I laughed SO HARD I almost died XD
First THE HICK, the THE KISS between the two Shizuru's. Omfg you are a WONDERFUL writer! XDD

*continues reading more~!*

The end of this chapter was so sweet!

This story has shaped up quite nicely, I love the way you write the characters because they're all pretty much in character, which is nice, and their interactions are priceless and very amusing xD

AH! Don't do it...don't give Haruka that kind of power. AH! I still have nightmares about the Otome Haruka...She destroys all the tea...please do let her destroy the tea (sonar de mercury runs off to hide all her tea)

I read it all. Great story. I Like all the funny things. It's very amusing. The role playing game, Haruka trying to take over everything, then another heroic act. I have grown to like Nao through this story. The things she does and says is so funny. Thank you for not writing about shiznat sex. I'm a Shizuru fan but not Natsuki. I rather read about Haruka/ Yukino. Wonders if Haruka will become Her flying kick axx Otome self or if the Nano thingys will kill her. They all use the ugly F word might as well throw in some Hentai stuff. It will be the first story I read to have Nina X Ers Sex hehe. Hint Hint.

Yae!! Cheers to Haruka x Yukino. That's funny that Yukino was found out repeatedly. Reading her diary then telling Haruka. I could feel her embarasment.

Drugged Haruka is cute. So is Mikoto in a tree trying to escape the dart mob. It would be cute if Mikoto kiss Alyssa too.

This getts better with every chapter. I am so lucky to have found this. Funny/sexy. Love it. Bravo!

OMG Viola Wanted to sample some of that too. Can't blame her. so Hot! WOW

Another great chapter. Finally Nina is mentioned. Yae! Tomoe is goofy. Sucks her thumb hehehehaha. I also liked Shizuru's advantages. Go Shizuru!

An army of Nao. I pictured it perfectly the way you wrote it. Giant Julia with Nao's face. It's a good thing I wasn't taking a drink when I read it, or the keyboard would have been saturated. haha I'm loving this like Mc Donalds.

Haruka always jumps to conclusions. She so funny. That was a great chapter. "we will protect you from her." ha