cute I love it.

very sweet :)

Oh! That was awesome! It had really good wording and though it was long it painted such an amazing image in my head! You're really good at writing and I think you should continue.

that is soo so cute! Iloveit!x

i love it it was well awsome. i added your story to my fav.s ok, hey do you mined pre reading my third chapter? if so thank you.

Wow, I really enjoy your take on the GaaSaku front. For being so short you captured their emotions and motivations pretty dang good.

Nicely done ^_^

very well written, i wish there was more to read!

its sad but really good, your a very good writer

This was so good! ^^

yay!!

cool. i like. it. it was a tad bit said as well...bittersweet if i say so myself

wow very good story keep writing and update soon please ^_^*

Aww...bittersweet! I'd never thought of this pairing, but it's so right, I liked this. Short, sweet and to the point, but I'd love to see an entire fic on these two. Good job!