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Loopstagirl
2009-06-24 . chapter 20
another amazing story-well done!
i really don't know how to put into words how talented you are!
McHammy
2008-10-07 . chapter 21
Another fantastic story, Purupuss. Thanks so much for the tissues I needed them. I loved the part with the boys on the lookout, beautifully written. It did have a happy ending - you didn't kill anyone off permenantly! Although I'm not sure I like your comment about another story and beating up poor Virgil - that story had better have a happy ending!
McHammy
2008-10-04 . chapter 3
Oh I can't believe it, you killed off Jeff Tracy! Not only that but Scott's turning into a string bean, Virgil into a tub of lard, Gordon into a fish and John into a Zombie! Excellent how you've shown their different ways of dealing with grief. I wonder if Alan will suddenly explode! I can't wait to read more chapters.
Angel Spirit
2008-08-07 . chapter 12
Ack, I've got to stop here...if I keep on reading, I'll be up all night long...LOL! ^-~v I really like the idea you've got going with this fic, I'm glad that someone thought of it! Talk about all the wonderful angst...*sighs happily* and I like the fact that you've got all of the boys in here too, and not just a few of them-to me it's always more fun reading a fic when they're all involved, even Lady P is starting to grow on me...I'll have to finish reading this tomorrow night, since this was a good place to stop...*fingers twitches* though I really do want to click on the next chapter...no...mustn't...have to keep control...**fights with herself to not click on the next chapter** If I didn't have to wake up so early in the morning, I WOULD...hehe...
Mystery-Rainbow
2008-07-15 . chapter 21
great story but 1 thing has bothered me the entire time reading it. What is with the h's when Parker is talking?!?!?
jendarra
2007-04-18 . chapter 21
It has just taken me two days to read this from start to finish.

this is great, you have caught the family just as I envisage them to be, however not quite sure Scott would have been quite so not on the ball about the will and finances.

But I love the way you write, keep up the good work of making the Tracy family come to life
Potterwatch
2007-04-13 . chapter 21
It may have taken me hours but I've finally finished your fic. It was a great read, definitely worth the time. You did a nice job of making the boys’ reactions to their father’s "death" rather believable. I think Virgil dealt with the "death" the worst way though. Lol. I hope you end up making a sequel 'cause I'll definitely read it. :P
KMWRoad
2007-03-19 . chapter 21
Thank you so much for the epilogue!! (and a humble thank you for your nod to my fudge, ahh, suggestion - even though I am sure your muse could have done it by herself). I wanted to see how you would handle the dedication of Jefferson Outlook and you gave so much more - character development, aftermath of ordeal. I really enjoy how you portray the inaction between the boys - it is so insightful. Besides the original idea of the series, the idea of how this family relates to each other in close quarters is what keeps me interested.

Since I am very new to fanfiction (I followed a clue on a Thunderbird website to it about 6 months ago), I just want to add a side note about how Pixie Pyre is a favorite story of mine. I did not know if I put a review on it so long after publication, if you would see it.

Looking forward to your next story. Keep up the great work!
Jules47
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
Thankyou very much for a great read and a wonderful story. The ending was perfect and I'm glad that the boys and IR are back in business.
team.aaf
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
Wow - that was great!

I love the banter between the boys - no one ever seems to trust Gordon... I wonder why? ;-)

Thanks for such a fantastic story!
Kimmy.Tosh
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
This was a wonderful epilogue! Every bit as good as the rest of the story! I like the way that normality looms at the edges but is never quite achieved until the end. There is great consistency with the original plot and it's so good to see the guys (and Jeff) coming to terms with what's happened. I especially like the idea of the race - go, Virgil, go!
Ms Hobgoblin
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
Hey, I was soo excited, that I had to do a double take when the alert came through that you'd added another chapter!

I'm glad you did. It was perfect!! I love the way you 'handle' the boys, and Jeff's almost downwardy spiral was interesting to read.

Well done on another awesome story...You can add more if you like! ;-)

Hob x
minstrelsy
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
I'm so glad you added the epilogue - it's just the right touch.
Thank you for yet another marvelous read.
MariaShadow
2007-03-16 . chapter 21
I have to say that I adore the way you play these guys off each other. You're not just using these characters, you've made them your own. And every time you write a story or a part thereof,you always make it better than the last.

BTW ' “Ladies and Gentlemen… And Gordon…”' is perfect!
Ms Hobgoblin
2007-02-18 . chapter 20
Just realised that I never left you a reveiw of the last chapter...silly me! I was so happy it ended well, and the concert antic's were both funny and heart warming. Loved every chapter of this story, you really are a master of fan-fiction.
I don't know how you do it, but keep it up!
Hob x (excitedly awaiting your next story)
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