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| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 8,  | abusei like that anakin is speaking to her and not obi-wan...there's something about that that's funny! |
| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 7, | abusei loved the meditation vision. masterful! |
| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 6, | abusei wonder what he wished for |
| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 5, | abusei wonder if obi wan was even the slightest bit worried about buffy he way anakin was for padme when she fell of the transport! |
| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 4, | abusei'm glad she's going with him! |
| MadBrilliant1880 2008-02-03 ch 3, | abusegreat chapter. it does seem like the only reason obi-wan grew a beard was to make himself look like ten years had passed. it worked, too! |
| Taeniaea 2008-01-23 ch 9, | abuseGreat story!! |
| Princess-Lalaith 2008-01-04 ch 9, | abuseI spent a while considering if I should leave review in this fic or not. You see, I'm too much of a fan of the BuffyAngel pairing to really say I like this fic. However, I also love the AnakinPadme pairing, which I think you're using better than the original writer did. So I will say this: I think this is a good fic, Buffy's pairing aside. Good work. |
| MadBrilliant1880 2007-06-12 ch 2, | abusefantastic chapter, gotta read some more |
| MadBrilliant1880 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusei read this story somewhere before but i realized i had never commented. i will remedy that now. i really liked that you pulled doyle in. i always like his character and was very sad when they killed him. didn't help that the actor died though, i suppose |
| Maxennce 2007-04-16 ch 9, | abuseStory has been well written. Initially I thought it rang suspiciously of Scott Ferguson's AU universe of the episodes, but you have left that track almost completely. Keep up the great work, looking forward to your next chapter and try to be original, because despit the fact that this institution (I use the word lightly) plagerises on a regular basis, it is the premise of an idea, not the entire story Cheers max |
| Bobboky 2007-04-02 ch 9, | abusecoolness |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-04-02 ch 9, | abusegrowls, got to hate weak buffy, and for me, buffy, even without jedi power, is so much stronger than dooku it isn't funny :/ she is at least twice as strong as him, as fast as him, and, above him, shouldn't ever get tired! a slayer is supposed to be able to run four hours at top speed without batting an eyelash, and you have her becoming super tired after a few minutes? And buffy is used to take on punches from people that can bench press thousands of kg, but can't take a slape from an old jedi ? Shudder. the rest is excellent :-) |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-04-02 ch 7, | abuseHum...maybe magus would be in need of where siri was ,too , so asking for information of where she was just like that may not be a good idea :/ |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-04-01 ch 5, | abusehum...a bit too much like the movies, me think. I couldn't help but imagine willow ordering the droids to face against dooku :p got to hate clones :/ |