Great story. I haven't had such a good laugh in a while. Very good portrayel of the characters as well. Good job!

muhaha this was great! I laughed so much!:)

I laughed the whole way through this wee story! OMG it was great!

LOL SHE IS SO BAD.

...does the Knight-Captain have a name? Well done for withholding it from us.

Anyway, your grasp of inter-companion dialogue is AMAZING and had me in stitches. Just-perfect. As is the line "pressed onward by his pain" because while I know it refers to his hangover, it pretty much sounds like penultimate Casavirian motivation, period.

Your writing style is clear and vivid, and your fic is hilarious. *claps* *faves*

*dies laughing*

That is all.

xD Simply mind-bogglingly brilliant! XD

That was cute, I really enjoyed, thank you! :D

I swear I was almost choking on my laughter while I was reading this! It swept me up and kept me thoroughly entertained!

Wohohoo, another nice fan fiction with Sand, our favorite elf *grins*

You pictured him so nicely, its so in character.

I like your Sand!

Just a quick question first, about the line “This strong and beautiful woman has captured my heart and I would do anything for her!”. Wouldn't Casavir say that WITHOUT being drugged? :) Okay, for my real comments.

You have a great sense of humor, and Bishop's lines/lines about him were hysterical. Mostly because I happen to like Bishop, but hey. Still accounts to something, right? Great story, good pace- though some misspellings of the names (I think you spelled Zhjaeve wrong. Though I probably just did too). Forgivable, but you don't want any literary speed bumps, especially in a fast-paced humor story.

Thanks again for the refreshingly humorous fiction!

-Valah

Hilarious! I was reading at work and so had to try not to burst out laughing! Excellent!

Hahah Great job of keeping everyone in character. Very witty and clever.

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Hey, I haven't even played NWN2 yet, but this story was really excellent. I totally agree with Sand's use of the Truth serum, eheh. AND his final comment ;)

Ah, I love Sand. He really had no other alternative here, did he? The knight captain left him no choice. Ah, well it all worked out alright in the end.

This fic was hilarious. I can't see Neeshka making off with all the money in the coffers. Of course if she steals a horse and cart, then she could...

Hee! Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us.

Whoaa ho ho! I'm not sure if Bishop would be "better" in bed.. just have more experience. 18 times? DAMN! Great story... sorry I really wanted you to write more but it was SO good! I'm glad it has a real ending though. Keep up writing more fantastic stories!