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Jade Sabre 2008-06-27 ch 2,	abuseLOL SHE IS SO BAD. ...does the Knight-Captain have a name? Well done for withholding it from us. Anyway, your grasp of inter-companion dialogue is AMAZING and had me in stitches. Just--perfect. As is the line "pressed onward by his pain" because while I know it refers to his hangover, it pretty much sounds like penultimate Casavirian motivation, period. Your writing style is clear and vivid, and your fic is hilarious. claps faves
Jade Sabre 2008-06-27 ch 1,	abusedies laughing That is all.
Hekateras 2008-05-02 ch 3,	abusexD Simply mind-bogglingly brilliant! XD
Tyriss 2007-05-17 ch 3,	abuseThat was cute, I really enjoyed, thank you! :D
Cougarmadcat 2007-02-14 ch 3,	abuseI swear I was almost choking on my laughter while I was reading this! It swept me up and kept me thoroughly entertained!
Kynrael 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseWohohoo, another nice fan fiction with Sand, our favorite elf grins You pictured him so nicely, its so in character. I like your Sand!!
J. Balacko 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuseJust a quick question first, about the line “This strong and beautiful woman has captured my heart and I would do anything for her!”. Wouldn't Casavir say that WITHOUT being drugged? :) Okay, for my real comments. You have a great sense of humor, and Bishop's lines/lines about him were hysterical. Mostly because I happen to like Bishop, but hey. Still accounts to something, right? Great story, good pace- though some misspellings of the names (I think you spelled Zhjaeve wrong. Though I probably just did too). Forgivable, but you don't want any literary speed bumps, especially in a fast-paced humor story. Thanks again for the refreshingly humorous fiction! -Valah
Alya Elvawiel 2007-02-07 ch 3,	abuseHilarious! I was reading at work and so had to try not to burst out laughing! Excellent!
leahhlee 2007-02-01 ch 3,	abuseHahah~ Great job of keeping everyone in character. Very witty and clever. `leahhlee
Amousca 2007-02-01 ch 3,	abuseHey, I haven't even played NWN2 yet, but this story was really excellent. I totally agree with Sand's use of the Truth serum, eheh. AND his final comment ;)
dedanaan 2007-01-25 ch 3,	abuseAh, I love Sand. He really had no other alternative here, did he? The knight captain left him no choice. Ah, well it all worked out alright in the end. This fic was hilarious. I can't see Neeshka making off with all the money in the coffers. Of course if she steals a horse and cart, then she could... Hee! Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us.
Lahara 2007-01-25 ch 3,	abuseWhoaa ho ho! I'm not sure if Bishop would be "better" in bed.. just have more experience. 18 times? DAMN! Great story... sorry I really wanted you to write more but it was SO good! I'm glad it has a real ending though. Keep up writing more fantastic stories!!
Lahara 2007-01-23 ch 2,	abuseOkay. Now I think I just snorted up a lung laughing. I love how Deekin, sweet little kobold that he is, tried to be discreet. Yeah, he might be a bard and a kobold but he's more of a merchant now and understands discression. "Sand drugged me." PRICELESS! Though I don't know why she's scared Casavir would beat her up. I think more than anything he'd beg forgiveness even though it's all her fault. But... I guess the Knight-Captain being so... er... girlish, she just makes the situation worse. We sometimes do that... and have to pay for it. I'm sure that Casavir would say something like "No no no it's not YOUR fault.. it's MY fault for not being upfront with my feelings for you." and KC will say "Yeah... it IS your fault isn't it." Then Casavir will narrow his eyes a bit and say."But you did drug me. And lie. Twice." Uhoh. Hehe. And poor Sand! Man he gets dragged into everything. I guess he sometimes deserves it. KEEP IT UP!! This is too funny.
DarthAmmonite 2007-01-23 ch 2,	abuseOkay, this chapter cracked me up hard.
dedanaan 2007-01-23 ch 2,	abuseHahahah! I loved this! Your PC is terrible and she just is digging herself in deeper here. I loved the interraction between the NPCs in the war room. Ah, Deekin and Grobnar are da bomb. I can just hear their song spreading across the countryside from inn to inn. And poor Sand. Bwahahaha.

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