 Hypnotized Angel 2010-01-04 . chapter 1wow, that really puts a twist on things! i love it!:) |
 MinakoEguchi 2009-12-30 . chapter 1Hehehehe... Funny last line...
Awesome! It's a really unique story, too, and explains a lot! please write more! |
 Amrun 2009-12-21 . chapter 1What an absolutely cute concept! I immediately caught the sakura blossom references. Very clever and original.
The execution was a little heavy-handed, though. Sakura's emotional reactions weren't particularly authentic.
Still, I enjoyed it for what it was. Thanks for sharing. |
 Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND 2009-11-28 . chapter 1Brilliant!
I love the analogy, and the character interactions were perfect. It was nice to see some writing that managed to convey a lot, yet be straightforward and not overly introspect-y.
One of the best SakuNaru fics I've ever read. |
 lacus14 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Such a great story. You should write more stories like this. Yey for Narusaku! |
 Miss Kanai 2009-08-15 . chapter 1Original, concise, and clear. :]
Good job. Though the kissing bit was a little rushed, it'll do. |
 ketaramaru 2009-06-13 . chapter 1umm oplease make anew chapter for full bloom! wow it was so long to ^_^ and good job and is the carpet waht i think it is ? *winks* heh...lol...red m eans feisty.. |
 Moonlight Stains 2009-03-22 . chapter 1Yay! That was really good! The whole idea for the thing was very unique, and apparently your friend donated it to you, but that does not lessen your accomplishment! A perfect battle plan can still end in utter failure if it is not executed properly. Great writing!
P.S. I am a little confused by one thing though... carpet matching drapes? I don't get it. What does it mean? |
 wispyboy 2009-02-10 . chapter 1Loved it. The ending made me laugh as well! Great story, keep it up! |
 wolf's paradise 2009-01-08 . chapter 1Aww, that was cute!! I really liked it. I liked the whole hair thing. That was interesting and unique. all in all, i liked it and i'm glad the characters were their normal selves! Good grammar, by the way!
- wolf's paradise |
 Deathmvp 2008-12-10 . chapter 1Very nice. I liked how it grow and even though it was hitting her in the face it took a time to sink in. I especaly like the little part after "The End" |
 senkoed 2008-12-06 . chapter 1interesting take on sakura. i really liked your naruto too. the enthusiasm is rather spot-on. but sakura's realisation that she loved naruto could be done better though. it's like her jump from sasuke to naruto is a bit too sudden. the aunt is really cool though. i'm imagining platinum blonde with sakura's eyes. xD but her carpet and drapes would be pretty interesting i suppose. lol. write on~ |
 wind797 2008-11-18 . chapter 1this was truly great with the love not over done and how sakura came to the truth of her feelings and to top it all oof with that one line “You didn't tell me the carpet would match the drapes!” that just made this into greatness one of the beat lines i have ever read thanks a ton XD |
 Narusakurocks 2008-09-01 . chapter 1great story, narusaku forever :p |
 Alyssa 2008-06-13 . chapter 1 So here i am reading the last couple of sentances
and im like drapes mathching carpet?? what does that mean??
...
3 seconds later...
* shrieking with laughter on the floor*
lol i loved it awsome job
drapes matching the carpet.. ahahaha |