Hm. This was very interesting. You are a good writer.

Ah, that's sad. I was thinking of doing something like this, where Sasuke doesn't take too kindly to being brought back to Konoha and Naruto just feels helpless, but you kinda beat me to it. I like how you put the emotions in, like the sentence "The only one he wanted, the only one they wanted, was Sasuke." That, I think conveys a lot of how Naruto feels here and in canon. I really liked this.

Freakin Onee-chan! I luv angst, but its better when it ends in same romanticly. YOu should make this muli-chaptered. You could like...uh...get Naruto to save Sasuke from himself! That would be SO awesome! I would SO read it!

Midnight Mourner

They'll never

know who I am

The only one they wanted was Sasuke.

I like it!

hmm. not bad. fitting, in a way

obsessive

That was interesting, very nice job! I especially liked the last line: But there was only so much a fire could take before it finally sputtered and died.

Good, it was kool! _

hi! you reviewed on my story, what's it called... he still cares? hm. well, anyway... since you reviewed, i came along and read two of your stories. i'm a fan of sasuke and i like... no wait, LOVE sasuke gettin totally beat up. i have so much fun with it. anyway, i didn't read one because it was sasunaru or yaoi and i still have to get used ot reading that. i found out the hard way what yaoi meant and it just brings back a lot of bad memories. *shudder*. hm... anyways, i like your stories and i think you should continue this one. it's a good start and i like how you used sasuke's two different names to represent different sides of him; very well done! XD

yes, i agree, it DOES have potential to become a small, muli-functioned work

but i dunno, i think that you should just leave it at this

it's loose, so it's open to perspective

but you have enough of an idea to know where it could go, you know?

i like the relation to a fire at the end (can't remember what it's called right now, sorry 'bout that -.-;;)

and i think that this perspective has major possibilties of becoming a reality in the anime/manga itself (i dunno, that's always seemed to be a real hook, line, and sinker for me)

and yeah... thanks for posting!

This was really good, I think its fine as a oneshot. It fels like theres nothing else to be said, and I like that. _! Good fic!

nice... i like the pensive mood around the fic. double thumbs up