hay, i don't know why you think this is not good. i thought it was great. i loved it. later dude.

that was a great story! i loved that!!

I can't quite see Dudley acting this way, but it would be nice. Harry would have a blood family member that was nice to him, hm. Well written, thank you.

Yea, he's not canon, but I like it - quite a lot. Its a bit more like a normal boy, who would reach a certain age and decide to try and make friends instead of maintaining the animosity. Of course, being a teenage boy, he wouldn't actually SAY i'm jealous but would find some way of grunting and gesturing that would somehow make sense to other teenage boys but be totally inexplicable to the rest of us! Nice AU what if. I enjoyed reading it.

so who knew dudley dursley is jelaous of harry