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| Habita 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI am totally dumbfounded. What a great fic! It is absolutely perfect and absolutely in character. Awesome job! :-) Thank you very much for sharing! :-) |
| irony882 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseLove the sparring at the end; who ever though Brennan would help Booth release his anger by fighting him? Great job with the characters, too! |
2007-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood character protrayal and great ending! |
| mel60 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm brand spanking new to the world of Bones, but this is so cute, and such a good look at Booth's character that you have me hooked. Hooked on the show, hooked on the fandom, hooked on the ship. I love it! |
| BitterKitten 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseDamn! Sweaty Booth... rowr! Seriously though, I'm working my way through all of your fics and I love them. You have a great knack for taking the smallest moments and expanding them into something real and believable and powerful. Well done! |
| jemb 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusewow, you are totally amazing at writing these post-ep things. I hate how we never see things like this at the end of the show. There's always so much left unsaid and you do it so perfectly. I love how you have B&B actually fight each other. it's never happened in the show (that I've seen) and I've not read it in another story - great original idea. To top it off your writing is really well done, gramatically and everything. I'm so impressed right now...and jealous too. |
| DaLiza 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I wish the real episode had had this scene. |
| eddie431 2007-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG Great story! While reading it i was expecting Booth in a rage of passion to kiss the living daylights out of Brennan. |
| Odakota-Rose 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. That was so them. |
| perfectcrime 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really cool. I loved that episode, and that was a perfect endding to it. I can almost imagine it, them fighting. *perfectcrime* |
| GSRGeeklover 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseVery cool! :) |
| Black Tulip 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. I especially appreciate that you kept shipping to an all-time minimum, and let the UST flow. That's the way it is on the show, and that's how it should be. If you had ended it with them making out on the gym floor it would have been cheesy and overdone. What you did was perfect. :) Dialogs were great, Angela, Booth and Bones were as in character as I've ever seen them in fic. The only thing I take exception to is the fight itself. Brennan wouldn't think twice about kicking Booth, but he would NEVER throw a punch at her. But if he ever did, this would probably trigger it. |
| freelancer-babe 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abusenice story. I liked it : ) |
| WOATCAPIITON 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseYes, finally! Something that isn't total horsh shiht. I must say, I was a tad hesitant to read this based on the summary. I'm glad I did, however. Booth's anger and frustration was portrayed wonderfully, and the fight/wrestling/whatever the hell it was really pulled that together. Brennan was spot on also with her reactions. Awesome job! Say, don't you write Smarty? WOAT |
| angel6.d 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. It was really well-written, and just super cute. I was so glad that Angela was there to push Brennan to go to Booth, and talk to him. It was interesting in the end when they ended up fighting. What Booth said, both times, was just really sweet of him. "You have me!" AW! Great job! Keep up the great work. Good song by the way. Is there going to be more? Hope so. -angel6 |