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Reviews for: Destiny Revealed
Hekateras
2007-07-06 . chapter 4
Yay! :D A brilliant sequel. I like how somehow, the future world of Tamriel is something different, but still feels a bit like Tamriel. Does that make sense? And of course, you've made me extremely happy by allowing Lark to rejoin his friend in the end. :)
I found it a bit nonsensical that in only 600 years, magic and the Nine have been forgotten to be replaced by technology. Most of all, I doubt that a world that already has magic would be able to develop technology that fast. Tools and gadgets and devices were invented out of necessity. So if you have magic doing everything that needs to be done, there's little motivation to do anything else, right?
That said, I would've prefered if you had made the future world of Tamriel not so futuristic. I don't really see why you needed to do that.
But all that is really just a matter of taste, and it's a wonderful piece of fanfiction in every way. :)

I loved how you tied things up with Lume and Shadow. Please tell me that someday you'll write a fanfic about Martin and the Heroine of Kvatch with lots of fluff in it!
achus93
2007-06-17 . chapter 4
hey, it's me again, from 'A Second Chance', i read both 'Snippets of Destiny' and 'Destiny Revealed', and both were very, VERY wonderful, i almost let out a tear. Almost...
thanks for the story man:D
Hermien Brits
2007-01-25 . chapter 4
A wonderful combination of fantasy and modern technology. It made me think back to the time when I was the Nerevarine. :-) Well done!
Laurelin
2007-01-20 . chapter 4
I like your story, you made me care for the characters, and you let me have a happy end. I look forward to your next piece of writing :) .
L.
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