This is well good. I have never seen the movie or read the book but I think I might now. Now I know that all your science knowledge actually has a purpose!! lol Very well written.You could give JK a run for her money!! xoxojgg

Ha! Ha! Loved it! the poor door. :) That's exactly what those two froods would do!

that was a cute little oneshot. it was enjoyab;e. i heart ford!

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Nice. A good fanfic exercise- take characters you know well and bounce them off each other until things get out of control. If there was anything to add, it would be Marvin. He was depressed, but not grudging. he should have said something like "You'll just want me to close it again once it's open." or something like that. Zaphod was pretty good, but he could have referred to Marvin as "That ruddy robot thingy" or something else Zaphodish. Arthur at the end was brilliant- "Where's the door?" Just like Arthur.
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twas very good James...it was interesting and fluent for the most...well done u! :)

I quite liked it actually. Only one thing I have to say though, Zaphods second head is on the side of his first one, it doesnt flip up like in the movie :P But otherwise a good short little read!

R&R MY Fanfic at the top of ths page please! "Hitchhikers Guide to the Fanfics"

Very good , i really like the title and it is kind of catchy in an odd uncatchy way. Your very good at writing humourous things so i would recommend that you keep at this style of writing. As for the bush, well i think the least said about this the better. Keep up this good work.

Oh my word this was so FUNNY! I laughed the entire way through it! You're really good at writing humour!

“The personality matrix is completely fried, and when I say fried I mean, did you use a flamethrower?!”

That was the funniest line EVER! I was yelling it through the house last night ad everyone thought I was mad... but I suppose they'd be right!

Hehe! Pee behind the hedge... you didn't do Duke of Ed, did you?

Anyways, it rocked! You need to write more funny stuff like that!

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