hehe, Cloud is WAY too good at using those big blue eyes! It's a good thing vincent has friends who care. Very well-written, as far as I can tell the characters were well-portrayed. Watch out for the odd typo, but we all make them *is quite definitely guilty*

Awesome. Vincent needs to lighten up a party or two will do him good it wont be long until he's got the hang of it and then they will struggle to stop him. We all know theres a raging party animal in him somewhere. Anyway back on point good bases for a story continue please.

our resident vampire!! hahahah sound like a good story!