I liked this piece a lot. Enough that I wish it were longer. As you see more BSG, you might think about expanding it to include other "if only" Roslin thoughts. Trust me, there are plenty of them out there! I'd love to read more. Meanwhile, there's one glaring grammatical error that I have to point out. It's "if only I WERE five years younger" and "if only I WEREN'T dying." I could cite you the grammar rule, but trust me, for all our sakes please just take my word for it. : ) Anyway, job well done! Please continue writing.

I love the "loop" of this! My mind tends to travel in circles, too, so this is such a realistic piece to read.

Good job of not forcing the character into places she's not yet willing to go. Keeping the tone light and just hinting at a physicality to the Adama/Roslin dynamic is what keeps me fascinated in a story. Well done!

Very good! Now if you watch the episodes in order, you can add more thoughts and material as you go along.

This is interesting. Please continue :D.

Hey! This was really interesting! Laura's thoughts were well done. It has a TBC feel to it, but it also works well as a stand alone. Thanks for posting!