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spazzgirl
2008-08-06
ch 2,
abuseaw man i just love this story
this is one of the stories that helped me to like the whole narusakusasu threesome thing

can't wait till next chapter
itasakuXlover1192
2008-07-06
ch 2,
abusecool, is there going to be another chapter?
nickel1984
2008-05-25
ch 2,
abusenice story
hope you add more
Spazztasticle
2008-05-13
ch 2,
abuse=o sasusakunaru loving =3
Sarcastic Avenger
2008-03-23
ch 2,
abuseWow. There are a lot of really dumb reviews of this story. *sigh* Just because people can't see fictional characters together doesn't give them license to be rude.

Please don't let those people turn you off to continuing working on this fic. I really enjoy it because it is an interesting new idea (at least to me), and you tell the story very well.

What I think is interesting is that Naruto in effect becomes the reader's "voice". He seems to voice all the concerns and reactions that any of the readers might have about a polyamorous relationship.

Keep up the good work.
TarynCasey
2008-01-07
ch 2,
abuseCompletely awesome.
IceCreamXD
2007-12-29
ch 2,
abuseOh la la. How sexy. Hahaha. :P Dang, you should write more of this, you also left it as a cliffy! *pouts*
Lady Renyel of Arella
2007-12-23
ch 2,
abusehm...this is interesting, and i think your doing a wonderful job portraying how naruto would be uncertain and a little reluctant!! Could you update with the third chapter soon please?
LittleFoxDemon
2007-12-11
ch 2,
abuseOH Gosh! This is cute~! ^^

~LittleFoxDemon~
Doom Marine 54
2007-12-07
ch 2,
abuseSasu/Naru/Saku... Swet
Michi P.
2007-11-27
ch 2,
abuseI must say...you're the one who got me into threesomes. *Ah* the guilty pleasures of fanfiction. :] Sorry...

Again, great writing, looking forward to more soon!

~Michi P.
KiokuUchiha
2007-06-18
ch 2,
abuseme when i found out there was a SECOND chapter=
0_0 *then i pounded my head against my key board...seriously*
when i READ the second chapter=
gdsfuyfgvwefglyiftgwecfjvjerjaenagvjigvbwgvfwerj.ghuiweyarwgvbkl;bzxdfhgiuesdfgvsa;e8oryqweh;gu8eairjhtioeyghglkyaehgldsyhghea;slyhfgwekl;rhtgehq;jrfgh;eYRTGTGKL;ASOFHIOGYAEHRUIRGI;AEHRIHGkl;fgsheghdfhgkhFtfGLfyGUGYFTG;UOtyTdcot7rsdkdcTEDtuotY67R;LUYRF65ilJSGJFgfAHRGAH...WHAT THE F.U.C.K...THATS NOT RIGHT*then i took a 10 minute breather after i bashed my head again on the key board and went over the painfully wrong images in my head...then*...AHH IT BU>U>U>U>U>U>U>U>U>U>U>U>RNS
...MEANTAL IMAGES AHH *then went back to killing brain cells*
KiokuUchiha
2007-06-18
ch 1,
abusemy facial expression=
jaw droped
eye twiching
gasping for air
red
discousted
and a hint of entertainment
my words=
...WTF
Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona
2007-06-10
ch 2,
abusePAMS(Please add more soon)
saNuThGu
2007-06-08
ch 2,
abuseLOVE IT! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I wish there were more threesomes like this..>_< UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
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