Reviews for The Neko Saiyan

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Dlikee 2007-12-05 ch 5,	abusei have to say wtf were you smoking when you write this? did you even watch ranma or dbz? Kasumi is no fighter how could see be stronger/ more powerfull than ranma and goku? please with the rewrite of this don't go o.t.t and o.o.c with kasumi, i love the ranma/kasumi pairing but shes no fighter at all
Cyde 2007-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI'm sorry, I couldn't read this. I made it through approximately two sentences before I had to stop and hit the "Submit Review" button. There were simply TOO MANY errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar, syntax and word usage. Enough to be unforgivable. I hate to see a good premise assassinated by bad English, but what you've done here fairly amounts to a bullet in your story's eye. Writing a disclaimer that your grammar isn't very good DOESN'T EXCUSE YOU from locating someone whose grammar IS good and who would be willing to help you out. What it boils down to is respect, which is a two-way street. If you're unwilling to respect your audience enough to put out a legible final product, then you have no business publishing or posting your work. Keep it to yourself. On the flip side of the coin, your audience needs to respect YOU enough to give you honest, helpful feedback instead of "GREAT STORY! (*x4)" for every single solitary chapter. This is a blatant lie, and it isn't helping you __in the slightest__. There is good news, however. If you're willing to actually take the suggestions in your reviews TO HEART and get a few people to go over your stories for errors, you WILL eventually improve. Remember, it takes a lot of practice to write well. If you ever want to write something compelling and gripping, YOU have to take the steps to get there and not dream up excuses for your errors and toss them up in a disclaimer as if they will serve as some sort of magical ward absolving you of all responsibility to your readers.
Kool Moe D. 2007-05-19 ch 6,	abuseYou mentioned Chun Li in your fanfic. Will she be showing up in this here too?
Arnold 2007-05-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseImpressive
Falkun 2007-05-03 ch 2,	abuseI've only read the first two chapters and i have to say that the idea is a very good one. However i wasnt able to enjoy the story because of some very serious grammer and spelling problems. I strongly suggest you get youself a beta reader/tester to go over your stories and fix the spelling errors. Besides that the story was good, it was a very good idea but just needs a bit more polishing to go beyond good and into greatness.
luger 7 2007-05-03 ch 6,	abuseNot bad.
Jerry Unipeg 2007-05-02 ch 6,	abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Great fights.
Vanipon 2007-05-02 ch 6,	abuseWay to go man I love it, please keep up the tail and show us what happen on the trip to namek. Also like on the anime Goku and Ranma should go on the second ship after Bulma, Kasumi, Gohan and Kuririn.
Vampwriter 2007-05-02 ch 6,	abuseThanks for the update. I agree some correction is needed, so get that done and work on the next chapter please. Gotta go, Ja ne
FalseExact 2007-05-02 ch 6,	abuseGood job
Wonderbee31 2007-05-02 ch 6,	abuseGreat section here, and looking forward to what's going to happen next time, and neat to see that this Ranma and Kasumi don't automatically get angry at each other.
Kool Moe D. 2007-03-15 ch 5,	abuseYou're making kasumi a badass. I'm with it.
Vampwriter 2007-03-07 ch 5,	abuseWow, Kasumi's already stronger than a Super Saiyan. There's a surprise. So when's the next chapter? I want more!
AshK 2007-03-07 ch 5,	abuseGood work on this update! Sincerely, TO/BB
Porthos112 2007-03-07 ch 4, anon.	abuseSeems that Fan fiction dot net has mangled my previous review. That and the fact I made a few errors myself. The second paragraph should read 'Not a big problem except for the five grammatical and spelling errors in the paragraph.' insted of 'Not a big problem except for the five grammatical and spelling errors in the chapter.' As four or five mistakes in a chapter wouldn't worry me at all. 'It's like being able to see a beautiful sunset, you know it's beautiful, you know what it beautiful but you can presently only describe it as orange.' Should have been, 'It's like being able to see a beautiful sunset, you know why it's beautiful, but you can presently only describe it as orange. 'Unfortunately doesn't always apply to the criterion of good fiction.' Should have had fan fiction . net as the subject. Why they don't allow people to use website names in stories or reviews I have no idea, and it's very annoying. Sorry for any confusion this may have caused you. Yours Sincerely Porthos112

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