Great story :)

Okay, dude you really have to update this story soon. All the other MGS stories I'm finding are totally stupid, and this one is the best one I've seen so far. Hurry up and update so I won't be bored when I get on the internet. Please.

So I'm guessing this accident that happened has something to do with how Raiden is in MGS4. So who'd Otocan get married to in this univerce? I don't think Snake would ever get married, except maybe to Maryl, but I doubt it. I didn't think that chapter was crap, but it could have been longer. Please check your spelling, it gets hard to red sometimes. I also think Vamp should be in the story, he's the coolest baddy ever!

"Uncle James" and "Uncle George." I died. XDXD

I hope you continue

It's good, but try to step up the spelling. Relay is really, and stiate is strait. Just a thought.

I'd say its good, like a serious storie with a lot of humor in it. Looks like a lot of great potential in later chapters.

The characterization is neither faithful or comically over the top, but the dialogue has a confused charm to it. In later chapters I'd advise adding a bit of thrust to the story, maybe with a bit of a crisis situation to test the characters and give a little oppertunity for comedy. Make the situation have some impact to it, and fulfill the Action/Adventure/Comedy classification of the story.

I know you can do it. :)

Sweet!
I love the mgs characters! Your story is getting pretty good, hope you write more. I seen your mgs flash on newgrounds, it was your user name that what caught my eye.
Keep up the good work!

'Tis an interesting one. I'd like to see where you take it. Um, I dunno any constructive criticisms, so, keep up the good work!!

Great Stuff! I hope to see more of it! can't wait for the next chapter...well see ya next chapter!

I'm so sorry that I thought that you were ripping off my story...Anyways I don't like how its turning out...I'm going to make a different story that involves Raikov, Volgin and my other made up character Shadow...

It'll be darker. Deeper and well lustful...

I just hope that you've played MGS 3


I have a question though that is making me super confused...are you intending that Raiden is related to Raikov?

I don't think that possible...the only reason Raikov looks like Raiden is because they knew that everyone hated Raiden so you have the chance to kill Raiden dressed as Raikov


Although I've been thinking about Raikov And Volgin's relationship and so I put it together for an idea and somehow Shadow is involved in it...I won't tell you...If you need accurate information on MGS let me know...

Trust me When you read Chapter 2, It's not. ^_^
Still, Hope you enjoy it.
Fox.

Dude! You ripped off my story! That is so cool! I'm not ** off! Read...umm Reflections: Only Time I have an spoofing idea if you hate Raiden...

Raiden Dynamite

Its like a spoof of Napoleon Dynamite with lots of Raiden bashing