Alyssa sounds like the only half Mary-Sue. Like when the author tries hard not to make a Mary-Sue, but does anyway.

I read a story just yesterday with a character like Cynthia yester day... They had Warren calling her sweetass. Yea, weird...

All of the girls are right on mark.

I am amused. Poor old Warren. *hugs him* Stupid Sues... *deathglare* I think the PPC needs a Sky High division, just for him. *makes note to start one* Don't worry, Sue-death will ensue soon. (no pun intended)

This is so hilarious! The Mary-Sues are terrible in Sky High fics!

I hope you update soon!

This is cute. The lengths one will go to, to aviod sues... lol

Nela

Oh god, he's finally cracked...

That's actually brilliant! please tell me you intend to update, and if not please help me on a project I'm going to start. Sky High fics are almost impossible to write well so I kinda need a beta reader to reign me in.

Dee
xoxo

OMG, pls pls pls!
continue with this story, it is hilarious so far
especially with the whole warren having a ponch thing
pure genius!

Aw why'd it stop? this was shaping up to be hilarious!

I like how you had the more complex Sue in with the best chance there- now if she might suddenly get a complexity boost, then she might have the ability to graduate to respectable OC ;)

Awesome stuff- I have to ask, are you a member of If not, seriously, join- it's a forum dedicated to bagging out terrible fanfiction, and all else that is godawful about society... then again, more often than not the things that thread can be a lot brain bleach-worthy, so if you get scarred, don't say I didn't warn you ;)
A nice bit of Satire ;D
Erisah

Oh this is Classic!

Heheh, funny cos' it's true, LMAO !1!11!one!eleventyone!!1!

And all that jazz.

Seriously though, Love this.
Nice Work ;)
Erisah

Very interesting storyline! I also didn't notice any obvious errors in anything like spelling or punctuation. =D Good read.

Heh. This is funny.

Me likey.

What a relief! A decent story in the Sky High fandom! Dang Mary-Sues, there's just no end to them, is there? I wish I knew a good way to get rid of them. Perhaps I should call Dale Gribble, Exterminator!

Haha, I'm really loving this story! I know that its supposed to be a Mary-Sue parody (who the heck came up with the name Mary-Sue anyways?) but I'm really hoping tha Alyssa will befriend Leo then find out he's Warren. Go learning-from-books!

Well, of course I like this idea :) Nothing is equivilent to the amusement one may find in Sue bashing ^.^

Still..part of me wonders if you got this idea from "When Sues Burn" Its very much the same bashing concept. And you even introduced the Mary Sues the same way, basically. You may wanna credit her for the overall idea of this bashing. But the credit of the following plot is yours ^.^

Changing his look and uping his voice alittle, its both cute and hilarious! I look forward to reading on ^_^ The potential this has is out the roof! So I cannot wait for more :)

- Tinuel

I was so happy to see this story going again! Some great laughs in this chapter, I especially loved the bit about Freeze Girl being more powerful because she's half-canon. Can't wait to see what the Sues do next ... maybe they'll migrate to another fandom to seek greener pastures ... no, wait, that's cruel - I wouldn't wish them on anyone...