finally! something is being say between them, just not what i wan to hear yet though, maybe the next chapter

aw..that's so sweet, the end part of the chapter anyway :)

interesting, i always like some good action in the romance mix

nice :) im curious to how your going to make this work between Buffy and tara, so bear with me while i read through it all :)

I like this story, and I've got a challenge for ya if you feel up to it. I'll warn you it's dark, and would lend itself to two stories, but I feel you might find it interesting.

Like all good things this story had to come to a end... really-really good story you wrote. Please continue writing!

Wispr

WOW! A real plot twister... and you were right took me by surprise. BTW... that was a good solid plot line!

Wispr

You wrote the fight scene very well and the plot twist with Travis was neat!

Wispr

Yes you are evil... but in such a wonderfully nice way... great chapter.

Wispr

Bloody fantastic... great chapter!

Wispr

Damn the kitchen scene was very cute between Tara and Buffy... you did the emotional tension very well. Also really like how you are writing Joyce's reaction to all of this!

Wispr

Damn this was a hart wrenching chapter... you really got the angst across very well with the Buffy at Tara's door scene.

BTW... love to see that picture you did!

Wispr

You really have a good solid plot line and theory for what is causing the unbalance. Very nice!

Wispr

Man oh man why can't my house be like this? Really good describing the house and rooms, it all made sense.

The car scene was way cute!

Wispr

I like a bit of Drama/Suspense mix in with the romance... can't wait to see where you go with this.

Wispr