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Silver Noise
2007-08-19
ch 3,
abuseThe best thing I can bring myself to say is "Wow."

Absolutely phenomenal story you've got here. Not many people can convey emotions and thoughts in such an adequate manner but you've done so flawlessly.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
RunningSnow
2007-07-09
ch 3,
abuseBeautifully written as always, you are great at portraying Shenlong's thoughts.
And I enjoyed his distrust towards Mr Spocks.
Hope you'll continue!
The End of Infinity
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abuseSimply wonderful..

I'll have to keep an eye on this story. Can't wait to read more!

-Mandy
The End of Infinity
2007-02-15
ch 2,
abuseThis is excellent, absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed every part of it - honestly the best Bloody Roar fanfiction I've read so far. You better hurry up and continue on, I'm waiting!

No constructive criticism for you, it seems like you know what you're doing.

Can't wait to see where you're taking this!
-Mandy
RunningSnow
2007-02-03
ch 2,
abuseNicely written, like how Shenlong is portrayed as unsued to human nice...ness.
please continue
Mz. Hunnie Dip
2007-01-29
ch 2,
abusenice chap plz update soon!
Mz. Hunnie Dip
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseyay!! i like this story so far! their aren't alot of shen X oc stories. plz update soon!!
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