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| Hobbit69 2007-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseGreat, but kinda short. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| invis 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseYou forgot the part where Olivia asks Elliot what he wants with his breakfast: "Coffee, tea, or me?" ;) |
| IndyAgent 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is short and sweet. And I have to admit I like the last line the best. "Olivia won't leave him." |
| AliasCSINYFriendsER 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLOL! How cute!! :o) hehehehe I loved that moment...I just wish it had been extended into a little something more... ;o) Loved it! Great job! ~mandi *_* |
| onetreefan 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseShort... Sweet... Nice EO!! onetreefan |