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| marshmallow jam 2008-04-17 ch 9, | abuseamazing! hilairios and clever! keep up the awsome writting can't wait or more! |
| Katy23 2008-04-16 ch 9, | abuseamazing chapter! can't wait to see what happens next! i'm so excited for when jack finds out about tori, i hope that comes soon. anyway keep up the good work! much love, Katy |
| Katy23 2008-03-28 ch 5, | abusewow this is a really great story! one question, does jack know tori's his daughter? anyway, this is an amazing story and you should update soon! ~Katy |
| marshmallow jam 2008-02-03 ch 5, | abuseWOW THAT WAS AMAZING!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| JB ChicK 2007-04-25 ch 2, | abuseI like this chapter.^_^ |
| mrspatrickdempsey 2007-04-18 ch 2, | abuseeek! oh i hope they meet! this is a great story! please update soon! |
| JB ChicK 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abusethat was such a heart warming story. i loved it. i hope you go on writing it. ^_^ please do! |
| Ricky 2007-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG that is really good, i hope you do continue. U MADE ME FALL OFF MY CHAIR FOR CRYING OUT LOUD...lol ANways please please please continue...look u know the drill lol!! From Rick |
| Bell510 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseNice story. |
| Will Fan 2007-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst things first. DON'T put author's noted in there - there should be no need to explain what you have just written. Just write another sentence or whatever to explain. I will continue later |