Nice story! I really like how you ended it, especially, by taking a scene from the actual story.

I also really liked the poem in the beginning, for some strange reason. ^.^

You really are so good!
I am really speechless right now...ü
I've read some of your fics but I haven't been able to review...so now I'm reviewing! yay!

Best of Luck ü,

~18-Punk-18-Princess-18~

so far one of the best gakuen alice fics ive read.

cool update soon ok

it was great! i think instead of ending it, you should continue it like the story, except focus on natsume and ruka instead of mikan! and mabye add your own twists to the story for entertainment! well, i gtg or im so dead cuz my sis wants on, bye!

I WANNA CRY! (CRY ABOUT THE STORY) LOVE IT! ITS SO SAD BUT LOVE IT! (CRY)

i really love it... especially the last part! :)

Good ideas. Bad story formation.

You need to work on writing.

Evaluation: needs major improvement.

I'm also gonna support this fic ^^ so in return keep up the good work gambatte!

WOW, that was really different! I need to find a new word for 'really' really really bad! Antiways, I loved this one! It kinda explained your version of what happened and it actually sounded like it could have really happened!

cool story! I love your stories much, and this might be the first time I'd comment for you, cause I lost count, but anyway.

That was way nice!

keep it up!

lovely :D

nice one there (:

update soon ^^

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snowmirage

Kya! I couldn't wait 4 more! Pls. update. pls, soon... soon...=)

only one word...sorry to say...but it totally...rawked! *squeal* ^.^ omg! i love it to bits! ^.^

i still feel sad of what happened to natsume when he was a child good story though