i thought this was really cute and awesomely funny!

Oh i think you just tore my heart out.

Riku/Roxas pairing can be so heart wrenching because Riku uses Roxas as a Sora subsitute and this piece just embodies it so poetically and yet brutally. The last sentence killed me, I hate Riku a little bit after this.
Poor Roxas.

This was beautifully awful, i need to go read some fluff now.

Wow that's really nice. Very poetic how a single sentence can tell a story

This was really good. I liked it alot. Nice job!!

Ooh, spiffy :D I've never heard of this sort of challenge at LJ, but it seems neat. It was very cute and bitter sweet, and with my guilty pleasure pairing!

OMFG. This pairing is my new obsession.

I love you.

Caro-Chan

*dies*

... I envy you so much for being able to say that this is not one of your bests. Because it's so good. *heart*
I don't think its ever taken me this long to read a fic that's only fifty sentences. But god, was it ever time well spent.

Absolutely beautiful.

~Sao

Its...so...PRETTY. o_o Me luff. I'd love to see more of theese... -runs off to check your profile-

~Animelover45~

S W E E T
Nice to see Roxiku popping up! The spider and height phobias were ute touches and when Roxas spelled his name wrong I was like:
"ROXAS YOU ** I LOVE YOU!"
Also I love the whole trying to dye blonde hair black... It's silver dammit! >_<
:SQUEALS:
*bliss*

I really enjoyed it even if it's 'not on of your best' :) made me smile and frown at the same time...

awsome fic!