Not as good as you hoped? Sweetie, is was AMAZING. Actually, it was epic. Seriously. It was sensual, alluring, and terribly seductive. It felt like one long poem, and was beautifully written. Amazing job.

heart.erratic

oh goodness this is adorable and sweet and so PERFECT!
I love it :)

that was really really sweet and very good with someone with a terrible case of writers block.

this isn't bad, if that's what you think of it. I rather like it, it's a cute way for Axel to fall in love. also with writer's block, if you ignore it, you don't have it. it's all in your mind, so if you think of it that way, you may be able to get rid of it.

so touching

I love this pairing and this short fanfic was lovely ^^

Wow... that was so... *sigh*

It was just so hopeful and sweet at the end.

-Kat-

Pairing that I like only because it's two characters I adore.

But I absolutely adore the writing. It's quite simply amazing. It's almost like poetry rather than prose- it flows very, very well, and pulls you through the story so that the accelerated pace feels natural.

Definitely liked the story, pairing or no. *heart*

~Sao

Aw! I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Wow.

I'm just starting to get into Kaxel and I must say, out of the ones I've read so far, yours is my fav

:D♥♥♥♥♥
SHELBIIE < 3 aihh. a KAiXEL FOR ME, THANKS TONS, DEAR.
andandand HINTS OF LEMON, LOL. (i somehow want you to write the lemon fully, LOL. but that's okay. because the dinosaurs would EAT jooh if you did xDD;;)
& kairi is so persistent & stubborn myesh? much likely her. x3;
y'know. i think if you guys write lotsa kaixel's i may get into them, too. this pairing just looks so luscious♥ xD;

oh well. tis a nice kaixel~ i hope you write more ! :D
(& we very much own the museums! > D)

AGAIN, DOMOO ARIGATOO, SHELBIICHAN;♥ ilu`!

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.

If this isn't as good as you'd hoped it would come out, I'd just love to see what it would have been if it had came out right.

I'm addicted to Kaxel, and you're not helping any ;)