Wow. I'm slightly speechless. I don't think that I have ever read a story that has intrigued me so much in only one chapter. I totally understand your waiting to update, and appreciate that you dont want to update for the sake of updating. When you do update I'm sure it'll be amazing. Thanks for writing such awesome stories!

I am really intrigued by the first chapter, and I hope you'll update it soon.

i can see what you mean by "this will mean as much as SoL to me" - it's a really good first chapter with a lot of great potential and i'm really eager to see what you do with the story. don't keep us hanging forever :)

this is good, i hope u still feel lke updating this...i read ur thing in ur profile n u said that u mite...yea so update! lol

Can't wait for 's great update soon.

I think you should definitely continue this story. It is very different, but I think it has a lot of potential to become an interesting read. PLEASE UPDATE!

please update again soon

omg, UPDATE, UPDATE , UPDATE!

im putting this story on alert, so hurry and update, i want to know what happens to her!

Please update this! Please please please!

Great story!

Did you stop writing it or ?

Very interested to see where you are taking this story!

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

Okay i'm officially intrigued. I already love it...please update soon!

This story is very interesting! I cant wait to know what happens next. Please update soon. I love Jess and Rory! Xox

Are you going to update this story? I really want you to!

I'm really intrigued by what you have so far. Any chance of an update anytime soon?

omg...never would think of anyone writing about rory like that...its different, please reight more soon!