This is the first time I have seen any story devoted to how Mahado was able to subdue the power of the Millenium Ring and you did it excellently. Well written and shows the struggle Mahado had in subduing the evil, as well as giving a glimpse into the struggle he must have had from then on to keep it from breaking free. Very well done. I look forward to reading more of your YGO work.

I loved reading this - the slomen and at times almost poetical language and style of Mahado's thoughts, words and descriptions was perfectly balanced against the - well, 'excitement' feels like the wrong word to use, but there /are/ things happening in this ficlet, and they're not slowed down or made less engaging by the writing-style. I also loved the way you portrayed Mahado's position in relation to the other members of the court, and his feelings for the Pharaoh. A great piece of writing!

Truly, you are a gifted writer! That was marvelous description. I only wish it could have lingered on, but I fear that doing that would have decreased the magnitude of the pain Mahaado felt! Brilliant work. Brilliant work!

This was extemly well done! Write more!

Oh, wow. That was incredible. I haven't read much good Mahaado fic, but that made up for it. I hadn't even *thought* about how it must have felt to do what he did. But I know he thought it was worth it, and this shows that quite clearly. EXTREMELY well done.