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hillary adelheide
2009-11-30 . chapter 38
I like this story a lot, I just read all thirty eight chapters. I like considering Bella in an older context. I feel I relate to her more now. The only thing I think could improve is that I have a hard time figuring out whose point of view a chapter is in until about half way though. It would be nice to just say "Bella's POV, or Jasper's POV" before writing the text of the chapter.
JasmineSaffronCullen
2009-11-29 . chapter 38
This story is amazing (: i love reading it and cant wait to read more, i think you have such a good story lie and i hope it all works out! ive not stopped reading it for the whole day!
Jaz x
prettyflour
2009-11-28 . chapter 4
Oh, I say go fishing!
twerdx14
2009-11-28 . chapter 38
review! PLEASE ?!
appleberryhale
2009-11-27 . chapter 38
please, please, please continue this story. I know its really hard to keep up with updates, but please send us a note and let us know that you plan on continuing or wrote a short update. i know that i'm dying to know what happens next, i imagine most other readers feel the same.

this is absolutley fantastic so far, i love it. i love your older, more mature bella :]

love, appleberry
msREDpen
2009-11-23 . chapter 38
Hi. A great story! I can't wait to read the end, so please finish it soon! Will Bella and Edward marry? Will Bella be changed? Will Mari Alice be changed? Will Edward finally loose his virginity?

I need the answers please!

I read this whole story (so far) in a day... so I am loving it!
twilightfanatic00
2009-11-22 . chapter 38
awesome story.. kinda sad the last two chapters but i hope r planning on updating and not leaving like this... PLEASE
nikkiscraps
2009-11-22 . chapter 38
4 months, I'm glad I just found this story. Patience is not one of my virtues. This is such a different twist from the other Bella moves on stories. I love that her daughter had a crush, how perfectly Bella. I'm hoping you continue this, I'm not a writer so I don't know what that block is all about. And so I also have no right to criticize how long between updates. All I have is groveling...please...please...please...please...you get it, I'll just wait-PATIENTLY!!
LisaBebe11
2009-11-20 . chapter 38
I love the story
FanFiction Fan
2009-11-18 . chapter 38
Will you finish this story? I want to know what happens.
NoPen
2009-11-12 . chapter 38
I love this story... please finish it. Any chance of an update soon?
Melinda the Proud Bookworm
2009-11-11 . chapter 38
Any updates coming soon? You are alive, I hope...
fiaanj
2009-11-09 . chapter 38
update! ;p
twilight4ever359
2009-11-08 . chapter 38
wow i love it, bella needs to give in and marry edward and become a vamp!
Iceblondie
2009-11-05 . chapter 38
PLEASE PLEASE This can not be the end of the story. OMG No please.
Your story was great I like to imagine how I would perceive it on the big screan, yah we all love a happily ever after that is what a chick flick is about, but this this was a love story beyond its borders. There is always a way for them all to be together.
Thank you for a wonderful read.
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