I like this story a lot, I just read all thirty eight chapters. I like considering Bella in an older context. I feel I relate to her more now. The only thing I think could improve is that I have a hard time figuring out whose point of view a chapter is in until about half way though. It would be nice to just say "Bella's POV, or Jasper's POV" before writing the text of the chapter.

This story is amazing (: i love reading it and cant wait to read more, i think you have such a good story lie and i hope it all works out! ive not stopped reading it for the whole day!
Jaz x

Oh, I say go fishing!

review! PLEASE ?!

please, please, please continue this story. I know its really hard to keep up with updates, but please send us a note and let us know that you plan on continuing or wrote a short update. i know that i'm dying to know what happens next, i imagine most other readers feel the same.

this is absolutley fantastic so far, i love it. i love your older, more mature bella :]

love, appleberry

Hi. A great story! I can't wait to read the end, so please finish it soon! Will Bella and Edward marry? Will Bella be changed? Will Mari Alice be changed? Will Edward finally loose his virginity?

I need the answers please!

I read this whole story (so far) in a day... so I am loving it!

awesome story.. kinda sad the last two chapters but i hope r planning on updating and not leaving like this... PLEASE

4 months, I'm glad I just found this story. Patience is not one of my virtues. This is such a different twist from the other Bella moves on stories. I love that her daughter had a crush, how perfectly Bella. I'm hoping you continue this, I'm not a writer so I don't know what that block is all about. And so I also have no right to criticize how long between updates. All I have is groveling...please...please...please...please...you get it, I'll just wait-PATIENTLY!!

I love the story

Will you finish this story? I want to know what happens.

I love this story... please finish it. Any chance of an update soon?

Any updates coming soon? You are alive, I hope...

update! ;p

wow i love it, bella needs to give in and marry edward and become a vamp!

PLEASE PLEASE This can not be the end of the story. OMG No please.
Your story was great I like to imagine how I would perceive it on the big screan, yah we all love a happily ever after that is what a chick flick is about, but this this was a love story beyond its borders. There is always a way for them all to be together.
Thank you for a wonderful read.