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shan4355
2008-09-04
ch 36,
abuseLove your story! Can't wait for an update!
Mrs.Sirius Black
2008-09-04
ch 36, anon.
abuseNO!Please update! Bring Edward BACK!
MrsEdwardAnthonyMasenCullen...
2008-09-04
ch 36,
abuseAh. OMG BEST STORY EVER
MAKE EDWARD COME BACK.
PLEASSE UPDATE NOW

I LOVEE IT!!
CalliopeMused
2008-09-03
ch 36,
abuseAs someone who writes, I understand the appeal of cliffhangers. They keep people interested, and are good places to stop. As a reader...

I very much enjoyed reading the story so far. Mari-Alice fits, just like Bella's past with Tony. I'll read the next chapter, whenever you post it.
Peppa Pig
2008-09-02
ch 36, anon.
abuseN...NO
not again!
You can't let Edward leave just like that!
Marietta and him were just getting along .. well tolerating each other but still!

please please please please please please please please update! or my peace of mind (and my homework) will never be complete!

PLEASE!
renesmee101
2008-09-01
ch 1,
abusethis is really good ^.^
lullabycharmer
2008-09-01
ch 36,
abuseAmazing story, and my fingers are crossed for a happy ending- though I don't see how that is possible after this chapter. Please, update soon!
moonstar43
2008-08-31
ch 35,
abusethats just weird to have people watching & talking about you when your sleeping...

awesome!
Chinnie
2008-08-30
ch 36, anon.
abuseAww..that was so sad! Hope you could update soon.
eclipseee
2008-08-28
ch 36,
abuseAww, that last part was really sad, update soon!
PurdueLiz
2008-08-27
ch 36,
abuseOMG. I wasn't sure I wanted to start this story, knowing it wasn't finished, and people begging you to complete it. I am so glad I did, it really is amazing. But now you must add me to the list of people BEGGING you, BEGGING for you to finish the story. It's been so long since it was updated, I do hope that you will finish. Oh god, poor Edward.
Topaz Eyez1
2008-08-27
ch 36,
abuseOkay, if that was an ending, I just have to say it sucked. The rest of the story was great, even if I didn't like Bella's daughter much, but I think it was very well written, and quite believable. It was descriptive, had a great plot, and was slightly humorous.

But you haven't updated for over a month, and I don't know if I should assume if it is an ending, but if it is: It was a crap ending. Sorry. The rest of the story was great, though.
crazymama
2008-08-27
ch 36,
abuseI just read your whole story... so good! I've been mulling over the last scene all night and all morning. I hope you update soon! I can't figure out how it's going to play out! I'm guessing Marietta is somehow going to bring it full circle and make some kind of concession giving her mom freedom to go and be happy with Edward, the way Bella did with Renee and Phil... but I can't for the life of me figure out how that would happen. The suspense is killing me! LOL :-)
Twilightaholic
2008-08-25
ch 36,
abuseThis story is amazing! Please write then next part soon, I can't handle the suspense!
SeanEmma4Evr
2008-08-25
ch 36,
abuseI've NEVER taken a liking to any story involving the possibility of Edward not coming back. It's just not plausible in my head, to think he never would have come back for her. Even the ones that I have managed to tolerate (and there are only about two) consisted of him coming back only a little while after the time he actually did come back in New Moon. This was something entirely different, and I must say I've really enjoyed it. I've never thought of what would have happened should Bella have chosen to go to Florida with Renee.

Clearly I like the story and I only hope it has a happy ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings. Both Bella AND Edward deserve one.
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