This is an adorable concept for a story, I love it to bits...but please, use grammar! Punctuation! It's practically impossible to read like this, no offense. Capitalize names like Lady Anissina, or at the beginning of sentences, proof-read it before you post, all those little things that make your writing flow smoothly. Take hints from other stories you've read if something sounds choppy. If you can clean this up a bit, it can probably turn out to be one of the better KKM stories on this site.

um...the first two chapters were great, but i think someone stole all the punctuation marks from chapters 3 and 4... i want to keep reading because it's a fun story, but it's incomprehensible now! :: cries ::

You didn't tell us what he turned into yet?! Gyaah! PLz Update soon. ^.^

Another great chapter. So what did Wolfram turn into, huh, huh? Oh I can't wait to find out! Wonder how Yuuri will act when he wakes up in the morning and notices Wolfram isn't there. Once again great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next!

Oh man Anissina messed up now...I wonder what the thing is? Oh and I love the part when Wolfram stuck Yuuri to the wall, I could see it, I thought it was very funny and I'm glad you made it longer and can't wait till the next chappy!

Very good start there girly! I wish the chappies were longer so I could laugh more cause this chappy was funny, especially the baldness of Dorcas oh man (wipes tear from eye) Great start can't wait to see where this goes.

LOL keep updating. I'm really curiuos on who's the gunea pig. Wolf or Yuuri?

Very cute first chapter. So who's Anissina going to use her new invention on? Yuuri or Wolfram? I can't wait to find out. Great chapter, hope you update soon.