 Areni 2008-06-18 . chapter 8 Amazing Story!
Great Dialougue between characters and very realistic! |
 super em 2008-03-25 . chapter 8Hi there,
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this. There isn't a whole lot of SFU fanfiction out there, but this would have to be one of the best stories I've read. Really loved it :) |
 TrunksGRL16 2007-04-05 . chapter 8 This was a great story! You did a good job interpreting the troubled realtionship David and his father had! |
 BabyKeepItSurreal 2007-03-18 . chapter 8I loved it! I always wanted to know what happened in between the attack and David's return to work. I think this is a good account of what might've happened. I wish there were more fics that delt with this... |
 Anna 2007-02-04 . chapter 5 Yay! I love this! You have all the characters down. |
 crazybeef 2007-01-25 . chapter 4Very cute but real David/Keith interaction. I love the insight into Keith's head. I can't wait for more. |
 crazybeef 2007-01-20 . chapter 2Great job. I wonder where this story is going. Everyone is very in character. |