ah like the movie then

Nice fic. I would really like to see an update. i read the previous version of this fic and i thought it was really good. please update this fantastic fanfiction.

great looking forward to more

UPDATE REAL SON!

I've read this before. Think you might actually continue this?

Honestly, though, you could've rewritten it. It needs work.

Rita seems rather OOC when talking to Nabiki.

... you OVERPLOTTED the fic ALREADY!

Look the idea for the fic is great, honestly. I always thought the green Ranager was the most badass of the bunch anyway. However, for one you got the information wrong. I hope you intended to intentionaly change who the green ranger really is, if not you fail as an author.

When I stated that you "overplotted" the fic, I ment that when you put WAY too much information and bad "acting" into the chapter. Its like watching a bad rendition of a Kung Fuu movie... from the 60's!

Look the chapter started off good, but it all went down hill once you had Ranma enter his mind like he did. While the entering of the mind bit wasn't a turn off, the fact that he "magically" got over lying to himself when he's been doing it for so long its a natural reaction was terrible on your part.

"Ranko" and "Panther" weren't much better. You DO realise that Ranko means "Wild Flower" right?

On another note: When you choose Nabiki you REALLY did not give a good enough reason as to why. idealy, either Kuno would have been a better choice, far easier to manipulate and all. Nabiki only had her smarts and while her mind is indeed a magnificent thing you'd need to give more on her pseronality that was a more selfish. You can always find worse people out their with the same smarts as Nabiki but 6x as worse. You didn't give her any real substance that would make a villian become attracted to such a trait that they simply HAD to have them amougn their evil bad of misfits.

And now onto the most important thing!

NO ONE likes a villian who's goes back to the side of "good" in such a wishy-washy patheticaly emo way!

And another thing, do you honestly know how stupid "In order, my name is Shadow, yes, I'm from Rita, she didn't come, because she's dead. Before you ask, I'm the one who killed her, because I was ready to turn good."

Ready to turn to good, a "good guy" killed somoen to turn to good? And then nabiki just off and goes, "oh sure I don't mind but I don't want to be a part of a big team?" the hell man!!?!?!?!?!

This is indeed a first for me.

Wow, keep it up!

Also, What will become of Tommy, or is he being dropped from the story line?

Later Days!!

Isumo1489

Cool I read this when you posted this before and liked it so keep it going and goodluck!

P.S. to the reviewers that say this fic is being stolen plz take the time to read the author's profile... he is Jalex.

My apologies, I had not read your author profile before posting my review, and didn't note that you *are* Jalex. If only to protect your own sanity against people like me, perhaps consider adding one sentence to your author's notes saying who you are.

Regardless, Good to see your return. Welcome back. Apologies for my mix up.

-- Pat

This story is a complete plagiarism. Take word from word from another authors work. Don't believe me? Here's the original:

Great job so far, please to your best to add more chapters as soon as you get the time.

-Will Ranma and Nabiki ever join the rest of the Power Rangers?

I do expect you to update often. you are combineing my childhood favourite with one of my current favourite manga. your updating will be often, and good. this is non negotiable (I'm not really serious except for these are or were some of my favourite shows, and I would like you to complete this if possible.)

kool, plz plz plz update soon ^_^

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-- Pat

great story so far and i can't wait to see more of it. and i take it you know alot about dragons too. its really good and the soul fusion is a good idea to get the story rolling and will give ranma some more quircks to mess with. hm...you just crossing over with the power rangers only? or are you going to have more to this like something involving time travel. or just most of th enormal story line for the first through third season of power rangers?