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| x-Maggot-x 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseIt wasn't much of a parody was it... it was almost exactly like the original aside from the Burger King part at the end and the character who was ordering the cheese. Almost word for word really. No matter! You dont happen to have any cheese do you? Im felling a bit peckish after reading this. : ) |
| Dark Magician Grrl 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWell, I've never seen Monty Python, and I don't really get english humor (I do get some), so I was a little weirded out. I liked the end where Jill said, "Well, I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to shoot you", and then the dubm 'waste of human life', said "Right-o, Madam" though. ^_^ It was interesting. |
| KittyAuthor6 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuse... ... ... I guess we Americans just don't get bloody English humor. Wait, does this mean you live in England/Great Britain? You didn't mention Baby Swiss cheese! That's the best next to that shredded cheddar that I love so much as to eat it out of the bag or on tomato soup! The stuff you buy at, like, Giant Eagle or Zagaras... |
| Freyla 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was cute :) I really like it. You should start a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker; that would also make it easier to read. Go Cheese Shop! Yea! |