is smelt a word?

I love it, it was so awesome and funny. The plans that Ichigo made were hilarious. Great story. You are a totally excellent writer.

AW!! soo cute i love this story!! write more!

what a twist!

Oh that is so sad!!

Ichigo's mother is so weird! :)

-gasp- THATS SO KAWAI!!

Yay IchigoXRyou!! or Ichi/Alto i love the cat version of Ryou to cute XD
Sorry i've been hooked watching the Japanese original Tokyo Mew Mew...i really dont like the english sub, which by the way has just turned up in England ^-^ Yay..no wait eugh dubs >>'
This has no relevance to the storr...Gomen XD
Yay i can't wait to read the rest...just 14 or was it 15 chapters left to read~
Yay a great story!

THE BEST THIS IS THE SECOND TIME YES THE 2ND BUT I JUST LOVE IT

Kawaii!

I almost fell over laughing during the make-up part

Cute! One piece of advice... try and develope your ideas... like you have great ones... water ride, Ryou getting wet, and the karaoke, just you could have written more on them. Other than that great!

That was a good first chapter. The conversation is all together in long paragraphs instead of seperate lines, but other than that, great start!

OMG, LOVE the "I can hear things!" with Ichigo! That was so awesome! "Sh. I hear them." and "Sh. I hear...CHOCOLATE!" Lol, heaps funny. Looking forward to the next chapter!

ASTRO ORBITER YAWEH