I looooved the descriptions in this

I wish you had made this longer. :( You did a great job. I like Helga being on the offensive.

Aww. How lovely. Wickedly lovely.

Cheers,

Herb3

Sweet!

So, so sweet.

And very well written, too!

I'm putting you on my Author Alert list.

Write more Helga/Salazar! ;D

You've made such a simple scene seem so magical. As magical as that night is. Beautiful fic.

I really like stories of the four founders and i especially love Helga/Salazar together (even though it is highly unlikely)

This story is really cute!

I love it!

:D

Awwh, I love Salazar/Helga, and this was excellent. It was really enjoyable to read. ]

The writing was simply beautiful. Characterization was as well as one could get with the founders, and I love, love this pairing.

Oh, the fluffiness. It makes me smile. Too bad I can't seem to write it to save my life.

Anyways, I love it! You have done a remarkable thing here. Having read a few Rowena/Salazar stories, it was nearly a shock to read a Helga/Salazar story. You did a fantastic job!

I also feel a need to point out that you have a remarkable grasp of the English language.

-Jenn

This is a wonderful story. You must consider writing more about helga and salazar.

this is a simple, nice story. good written.

Wonderful fic. Your prose is quite lovely.

Love it ) For some reason I like this pairing, wish we knew more about the founders.

I loved it. I almost felt like I was there watching the whole. Excellent writing.