PLOT!

have them kiss
have a epilouge with a wedding
and end the story

nice story, more of a plot would be nice and could you make edward suffer more for leaving? lol

After I read this it just made me smile.

That was a very sweet story! I almost cried! Are you going to write more on the story or is it completed?

This is soo cute! Although you've made a few mistakes, that confused me a bit. But your story is great! Update soon!

bomb,
keep goin

please update! it has such a good story line!! please please please please please

OMG! that was a surpise cant wait till the next chappie!

OMG i love it love it love it love it!

I like your story, I just don't understand a few things. It makes no sense that she can change the way she looks and it makes it a little less romantic that Edward couldn't tell it was her, by the way she acted and her aura. But despite my numerous questions, I really do like your story.

AWESOME! ME GUSTA MUCHO! lol =)

bella has some sweet tricks man

tears were starting to form in my eyes...love that they are back together...but I hope he forgives Esme, she was only protecting Bella.

you have got to keep writing. I am crying so hard right now that i can barly see the key board!