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Reviews For: Yami's Unbearable Life

kiki2222
2007-05-26
ch 6,
abusethe stabbing yami in the eye was very shocking i hope yami does not lose his eye that would suck and i hope he does not die i hope he finds his night in shinning armour
Yami-Yugi3
2007-02-23
ch 5,
abuseMore please!
kiki2222
2007-02-19
ch 5,
abusethis story is so sad but i cant stop reading it
XxAnimeFelinexX
2007-02-07
ch 3,
abuseYami's to young and to open.
Phoenix From The Ashes
2007-02-07
ch 3,
abuseok, for one thing i don't think that Yami would be soo... happy. i know that sounds stupid but seriously i think he would be saying a little more than 'Seto came in and raped me again' heck, wouldn't he be unconscious. Its a good idea but you kinda need to put more emotions into your characters
XxAnimeFelinexX
2007-02-07
ch 1,
abusewhich do you liek writing better: charater torture, or rape sences?
Yami-Yugi3
2007-02-04
ch 3,
abuseMore please!
Yami-Yugi3
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseMore please! ^_^
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