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| kiki2222 2007-05-26 ch 6, | abusethe stabbing yami in the eye was very shocking i hope yami does not lose his eye that would suck and i hope he does not die i hope he finds his night in shinning armour |
| Yami-Yugi3 2007-02-23 ch 5, | abuseMore please! |
| kiki2222 2007-02-19 ch 5, | abusethis story is so sad but i cant stop reading it |
| XxAnimeFelinexX 2007-02-07 ch 3, | abuseYami's to young and to open. |
| Phoenix From The Ashes 2007-02-07 ch 3, | abuseok, for one thing i don't think that Yami would be soo... happy. i know that sounds stupid but seriously i think he would be saying a little more than 'Seto came in and raped me again' heck, wouldn't he be unconscious. Its a good idea but you kinda need to put more emotions into your characters |
| XxAnimeFelinexX 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abusewhich do you liek writing better: charater torture, or rape sences? |
| Yami-Yugi3 2007-02-04 ch 3, | abuseMore please! |
| Yami-Yugi3 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseMore please! ^_^ |