That was a lovely little story. I love the unity they both share, and how much Shina is willing to help Long. It seems so tragic that the evil resides within him and makes the future seem somewhat uncertain, though with Shina by his side, I'm sure he has nothing to worry about. She really is a kind young woman, soft-hearted - its very believable. She can't be a bad ass all the time! I liked it very much - a very touching story. I enjoy seeing this pairing. :-)

You should know by now that if it's Shina I like it, but to add to that I'd like to say this is well thought out and I couldn't find any grammer errors or anything like that. The Shina/Long things getting a little old though, not that you're the only one who's focusing on that. And yes the arcade endings sucked but at least they weren't as bad as the ones from 4...or primal fury but primal fury did have cartoons... Overall good job.

Whoa, i wish that Hudson had an idea like yours, but I like the way you use your head in writing Keniko/Yulice fics. I keep a clear eye on my 2 fave pairs... hehehe!

*drewl* must...update... *drewl*

So..*sniff* AHHHHHH! Why couldn't you write the endings?

How cute, Iliked the ending!

Yay! Keniko forever! Loved your fic! Very sweet!

A much better ending to Janes story too Christi! Hudson was really screwing up all over the plce in that game! I like that you added Long into this fic as her companion too. The ending on the guy had someone else there which was really wierd to me, but whtat can you say right. I love that at least they didn't have her ooc in the ending on the game. So which ending is next Christi? I hope you choose someone else with garbage for an ending. I'm sure you'll be able to turn it to gold with your writting! See ya next time!

Thank God someone decided to redo the damn ending to Uriko's story! It was so horrible in the game. Uriko acted so much like a child! It's good that you gave her a more matured attitude. Although if she acted like that I can see why Kenji wasn't too interested anymore since he's a serious person. This ending you did was definitely very interesting and sweet. Much better than that crap Hudson came up with for her. Good ending Christi, maybe they should have you write for Hudson instead!_ "snickers"

I love it! great jangy jkang ness!. very good.

oi this is 10ytimes better! HEAR THSAT HUDSON! 10 TIMES! thank god we have an alternative

Now, I haven't played BR3 myself, but if you say the character endings suck, I'll believe it! This was written wonderfully (as usual) Keep it up! _

This was corny as hell!

Just kidding! P Hehehe, like your ending to Riko's story, this was very cuh ie, too! I really wanna shoot Hudson for being so bein-danish... .

Jang! Yay! Hehe, it wasn't corny at all. I loved it!

Serene, beautiful, descriptive... another excellent alternative to the ending created by the official, but horrible writer behind BRIII. Kudos!

Thomas