Cute. Kinda made me wanna cry... T.T ^^great writing.

awwe [:
i liked this one

=] cutsie!

Wow. Tenten is a really scruffed up piece of art in this one. xP

Oh, my. It was so sweet, and thank goodness for the first sentence - 'his lover' - because I just nede to have some more doses of NejiTen... *smirks*

wow...that was good. you haven't lost your touch at all.

Wonderful fic. It shows the endurance and strength Tenten must have as a kunoichi through the admiring eyes of Neji. It's well thought-out and truly beautiful!

~ Nessie

Aw, KAWAII! XD
You should really post this up somewhere like the NejiTen LJ community or something. It's a nice quick-read. :D

Gwauh! (snuggles fluff) I'm sick and in a fluffy mood! This cheered me up greatly. Awesome job!


Kadasa

Wow, that's really good. ;D I love it!

so cute and sad, I loved it!

woot awesome fic i luv the story line!

Good story, very well written. The whole shinobi not liking distinguishing features thing is interesting

aw you could have made it longer!

So, like the utter pervert I am, I totally thought that this 'scar' was something ENTIRELY different.

But, I was pleasantly surprised - rarely do we ever hear of actual injuries between teammates. That is, we always hear of the life threatening ones, always induced by the enemy, but never the accidental ones inflicted by teammates.

It's definitely a view I've never considered, nor read about - I am pleased you took on this motif.

A very nice job - but I expected no less.

QBC