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Dragon Scales 13
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseExtremely well-written! I always wondered what it would be like to come back from Oblivion...
Hekateras
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseWow... That was... powerful.
You did justice to the sheer horror that is Oblivion. That concept doesn't seem to get nearly enough attention in most fanfics or the game, for that matter. You actually portrayed those who had entered and escaped Oblivion as psychologically traumatised, just as it should be, if you think of all the bodies, and things that were once bodies, that you find on the other side of an Oblivion gate..

Nevermind, that's just me rambling. :) Wonderful story, and the ending was powerful as well.
Moonless Nights
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuseYOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!
L'Ankou
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseOh, a very intriguing and well written chapter ! And what an original approach in the storyline too !
Looking forward reading more.
exeHL
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseVery mysterious and dark (insightful considering I'm studying short stories of this sort). I've fought through a dozen of those gates on Oblivion, but I haven't looked at it from this perspective before.
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