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Csillan.Rose
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuse! ^_^ What can I say. Amazing.
I only wish you had written their fellow pilates' reactions when they found their cockpits full of marshmellows... maybe you can add a chapter :)

~Hilary
Rebel.Dream.Tatooine.Ghost
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseROTFLMAO.
Amelia
2007-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI would not put it past Wes to pull something like that. Of course, everyone will think of a way to get him back, like the "real" Kettch prank. And I wouldn't put it past Face to "help." Just distract him for me while I ask Vape for a cold one. :)

Fantastic all around. You even got to torment Squeaky. ;)
Beth Weasley
2007-05-24
ch 1,
abuse*dies* Oh. Dear. God. This is so hilarious! I wish you'd put in everyone's reactions, though. I'm trying to imagine how big those crates must have been. Two, three meters on an edge? You have Wes down pat, I think. Face, too. Love it!
Kithryn
2007-05-18
ch 1,
abuseThis story actually made me laugh out loud. Which could be a bad thing because I was reading it from my computer and work lol. but I couldn't help it the mynock part was too funny.
Endaewen
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abuseI can't help but laugh at this. I'd love to see the human reactions to this prank (that and hope the electronics are well insulated from the mess). Just finished re-reading the Wraith books so it's particularly funny right now.
Sachita
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuse((-;...that was very funny.
I can most certainly imagine Wes doing sth like that- his mental age is an evidence of that. I think he´s somewhat over three...
Will you do a sequel where the others discover their "new" X-Wings as well?
- Sachita
Quacked Lurker
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abuseNice job. I liked it alot--got me laughing (not rolling on the floor, but definelty auditable)
Yep, you got Wes' attitude down pat. [I think--it's been a while since I read the Wraith adventures]
Are you planning on doing a second story based on the descovery of marshmallows in the cocpit? You don't have to but I was courious.
I didn't know that you believe Vepine understood human humor as portrayed. Maybe this guy just knows pranks and beleives he can't get in trouble since he is an expert at keeping the craft in tip top shape.
Thanks for sharing this humorus story with readers.
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