Reviews for Shackles We Bear

Reviews For: Shackles We Bear

Ramirez Wolfen 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseSweet! Nice one
sharperimage 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abusewonderful characterization! you mold Balthiers pesonality perfectly! though you could have described some stuff better. i guess, i wish i could fit into Balthiers personalitly as well as you, i have trouble with diolouge like that. well good luck to your next story, you should consider writing some more Balthier POV fics!
Binibini 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseAbsolutely loved it! You did an excellent job of capturing and portraying Balthier and Fran. I loved how descriptive you were in your writing, it was written very well and following along (while reflecting back on the gameplay) with the characters was enjoyable! I hope you continue to write more. Especially those having the dashing sky pirate in it!
Janiqua 2007-05-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat really was good! I definitely thought Ghis knew more about Balthier than he let on. What a laugh.
NoahLondon 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was fantastic! I especially love your Balthier; he's so in character! I would really like to read some more Balthier/Fran from you in the future. How about considering it? Regardless, this is great, and you're a really gifted writer!
paper bell 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abusenice balfran. and yes, you are right; writing dialogue for balthier is so much fun -- i do put witty comments in my balfran fict xDD;; nicenice. i expected more than this, though. but i think this is still good. write more. ` MCHLV; < 3 felia.
Taryn Eithne 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseHm, an awkwardly adorable ficlet! You kept all the characters frighteningly in-character, and it was so adorable! I liked this part in the game in particular because it really felt like it would have been this intimate--thanks for fixing the scene! (P.S.--Beautiful cheesy in trying to calm Fran--it's a good thing)
GeorgiaPeaches 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, I loved it. Balthier/Fran is so yummy. =P
Elynsynos 18 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseSweetness. You kept the entire party in character, and the words smooth. It is a delight to finish each sentence and then begin a new one. The fifth to last paragraph though could've used a little bit of rewording, and perhaps a little more detail on the scenery. The ending was touching though, you successfully tied the beginning to the conclusion. "Shackles We Bear" is like filet minion; juicy, tender, and a delicacy.
1FG-BEM 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abusevery sweet, and definitely one of the better fran,balthier stories ive seen. i thought you did balthier extremely well, wonderfully entertaining. frans characterization was also spot on. i didnt particularily like the "..Together we will right these wrongs...I can’t fly alone—I can’t imagine going back to that..." paragraph. somehow i find it difficult to imagine balthier opening up so honestly and deeply like that. i would praise you more but im in a bit of a hurry. really looking forward to your future writings, especially with these two. great job on the story, its one of my favourite scenes =)
anonymous 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abuse'An innocent nudge', god I luv Balthier!
SpazKit 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseFantastic little piece, and you got the characters and their interactions just right. Great work :)

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