love the story! and dont worry your not the only one who cried at the end of the game...(though i do have some theories of why she shattered the mirror) cant wait for the next chapter =)

'Tis. Please continue. ^^

I was ** at Midna's actions. I saw no need for it, myself. Dark and Light coexist all of the time! Caves remain dark during the day, and stars pelt the earth with light, even if it's blocked by clouds sometimes.

Besides, Midna is a shadow. Which is what happens when light and dark meet. =)

Nice update. ^_^ Keep up the good work.

I like it so far. Very different from other Midna/Link stories. Please continue!

I happen to like the 1st person style that you are writing in. Especially if you think the story is better that way because people can have their opinion but the whole idea sprang from your head.

This was great! Can't wait till ya update ^_^

Quite a good start for this fic. Keep it up. ^^

I think it sounds very cool. The whole Ilia-going-on-a-quest-to-reunite-Link-and-Midna idea is original and good and I like it so YAY FOR YOU!

I'll keep an eye out for your updates.

Wow, this is a great story, I can't wait to read more of it!
And I Always cry at the end of the game, even though I've beaten it 6 times already, and have seen the final cutscene 6 times, it Always makes me sad and makes me cry =\, it even made my Mom (who has never really seen the full TP game) and Krista cry too, my Dad just shruged it off though >>
anywho, please update soon! =D

Very nice start, though you might want to write it in the third person perspective.

Keep up the good work. ^_^

I like it. You may have spotted my fic which involves a rather well detailed back story that I've been developing for some time. I happen to like your style of writing and agree with the Link X Midna point of view.

I like this story, can't wait till ya update!

I like the style you've written it in! Is that how it's going to be throughout the entire story? And please tell that there's going to be more to the story right!?
Could I suggest getting a little more descriptive, and I don't mean so much as scenery and things since you've got that down packed, but like, more descriptions of the characters feelings would be helpful so we can get the real feel of the whole thing ya know?
Great concept, great story so far, and can't wait for more!

Adios until next time! :P

Wow I swear man, either we think alike or we have the same story.
Your version is good too though, not that I perticulairy think my story is better than anyone elses. Actually scrach that. We have a very “Similar” story. Anyway id like to see how yours turns out. Keep writing man.