I just wanted to say that I really enjoy your story so far and that I can't wait for the next chapter. My guess as to their unexpected guest is Kolya because he is the ultimate enemy that haunts all their dreams but especially Elizabeth and Rodney.

this is so good...can't wait for more!

Oh. I like - I can't remember if I reviewed on the earlier chapters - I could look but I'm basically lazy by nature - hm, can I guess very boringly and say Koyla? (he, he, is this your clever way of getting us to think someone up, and you take the best one? if so, I give you brownie points for clever scheming...!) Anyway, I'm curious to see where you go with this one... I mean, she is married to John, right? Or did I screw up my understanding somewhere there? Either way, I'm really liking her with Rodney...! *hugs* Jen.

ah crap! let me guesse...Kolya?

He's got struck before?! Pretty unlucky. Doesn't a lightning strike cause more damage than we're seeing in this story or is this depending on other factors as to why his case here isn't specifically too serious... Anyway, I'm guessing since this is end of S3 set, that it's our friend Michael. :D

ahh, its not kolya now is it?!?! but hurray for updating, was worried you abandoned the story

Kolya, is it just me or can you actually hear his voice saying that last line. I might be wrong but man. This is good can't wait for the next chapter.

Yay for acknowledgement! LOL

I like this chapter, it's moving us from the intro scenario (nature walk with a twist) into the main story (...okay so I don't know what this part is going to be). Ya gotta feel bad for the Atlantis science department, they have the worst luck!

I shall not guess, i'd rather demand more updates! ;)

yay! more please, lovin it so far :D

Very good. My prediction is that the person with the gun is Koyla. I am right or not...

AHH! We're still in the setup?

I've got a taste for it. The fact that it's a little different than the usual affair still has my attention. More soon please.

i love this so far. I am now impatiently waiting for the next chapter!

Gah! You mean, mean, mean author! That was totally unacceptable! i demand an udate now!...Uh pretty please?
wicked story, please hurry

Another cliffhanger. Good story so far. I can't what to read the next installment.

Another chapter, nice!

It was a bit short but it got us to the next plot point, so i'm totally satisfied. I'll happily volunteer to beta read if you need someone to.